Original Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Harem Martial Arts
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There comes a time when we have to step out into the world on our own. No matter how frightening or depraved your world might be you have no choice but to face it and more terrible, still, to face yourself.

For Ulen Gunter Lars Yeadon this is a struggle to lift a life long curse that has made him a object of pity for those around him. As he faces this struggle he will come to realize that the most terrible curses are those we inflict on ourselves.


This fiction is Mature: for adult situations, language, depictions of gore, violence and enslavement.
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Kachin
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So far (chapter 5) you have piqued my interest, so I am looking forward to future chapters.

Osborn
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Hi Kurokuma, i like your other works more than this one, but i can see that you're getting better and better as a writter, cause the story is very fluid and easy to read. The worldbuilding is really good and the characters have a lot of depth.

 

But to be honest, I don't really see the appeal on making the MC so crippled. What's more, I truly don't understand why you make him go around with a nasty hole in his eye socket and using his hair in a failed attempt to hide it instead of simply using an eye patch or a glass eye. And as if that were not enough, the girl he gets is also crippled lol.

 

I would give it a 4.5 stars if you healed your MC, but in the meantime I can only give it a 3.5 stars.

 

koog008
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Different from the typical

im loving this fanfic.. a credit to scott for creating this world because its awesome.. and yours is different because it adds an adventure type of feel.. and thats the kind that i like.. i like your mc.. i usually HATE mcs because a lot of them are stupid.. im glad he has that disability, its different

LovelyLover
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Brutal and heart warming?

Opening was obviously brutal and i'm not a fan of these tragicly begun stories, in particular the one's that are tragedy tagged the whole way through having one good person die after another.

 

This one while having an unpleasant start, seems to have had a rather nice turn around. I expect plenty more unpleasant situations but if it doesn't get to nasty I definitely see myself checking frequently looking forward to what will happen next. I hope the situation between him and his future group is warm like what has been showing so far with his first partner.

 

The detail, effort, story, and frequent updates. I'll be checking this page every other day hoping for more. Please keep up the good work.

maracas
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 the details i read so far i love em x)

keep it up even if it destroy u xD

 

like your main character , even though he has a hellish start (heck even years later from that start) he still show love and respect to other living beings, im looking forward for the next pokemon i mean d-girl XDD

t0xic
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Interesting, Very much so.

The story starts of with a bang. The charecters are different from most and that makes the story appealing. The mc has a lot of mystery around his actions. Hs abilities are quite potent, so far he is not op. The story will get you hooked. Keep up the great work