The Lost Magician

by nghtra851

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy
A young man, master of magic, wanders around the world in seek of clues and answers for his goal. Never would he had thought, that at the start of his adventure, he would stumble upon someone who resemblance him from the past. Was it fate? Destiny? Either way, her fierce eyes burning as bright as the sky, giving him once again the strength to continue. After all, he barely had any clues at all...
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Jirun
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Good beginning, we will see where it leads

Hey, nice beginning. Not slow not fast, just right for me.

Also not much to say about your grammar and spelling.

kevbobb
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Keep up the good work. I like the setting so far about how he is an amazing mage. I would like to know a little bit about the world. Maybe in the next few chapters you will give us a background story.

Alixonzen
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only 4 chapters so far and yet its pretty good 

fatetobe
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a very good start that make me think what happend to his teacher and who he really is

something everyone has to read that like magic

mataneloro
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Generic fantasy storyline of Swords and Magic

Good battle scene

Solid story

Have a good grammar and flow of reading

Easy to understand

But still have unique mysteries and intriguing plot twist

Recommended for any one who likes above