Reincarnation Flower

by Frostypine

Original Adventure Drama Fantasy Psychological Romance Gender Bender Slice of Life Supernatural
They were once the hardworking, unpaid, unappreciated peasant companion of an incompetent hero, their unlimited potential was continually stifled by their humble birthright, the whims of the gods' and a lifelong case of bad luck lasting over at least several lifetimes. Then a hundred years after their death…they begin an entirely different kind of existence.
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Chapter Name Release Date
Volume One A Very Long Prologue Part 1: The Hero's Peasant Companion ago
Volume One A Very Long Prologue Part 2: A Glimpse of Past Events ago
Volume One A Very Long Prologue Part 3: An Unexpected Outcome before the Expected End ago
Volume One A Very Long Prologue Part 4: A Friend at the End (Side Story) ago
Volume One Chapter 1: The Forum Post of Doom (Side Story) ago
Volume One Chapter 2: The Egg ago
Volume One Chapter 3: The Dragon Egg ago
Volume One Chapter 4: The Gem Dragon ago
Volume One Chapter 5: A look at the Present State of Things ago
Volume One Chapter 6: A Kingdom of Dragons ago
Volume One Chapter 7: A Message from Brother ago
Volume One Chapter 8: A Problem With Communication ago
Volume One Chapter 9: Intimacy ago
Volume One Chapter 10: Ten Years Totaled ago
Volume One Chapter 11: The Dream Master ago
Volume One Chapter 12: Things Start to Change ago
Volume One Chapter 13: Crucible of Emotional Tempest ago
Volume One Chapter 14: Preparing the Way ago
Volume One Chapter 15: The Dark and the Lights ago
Volume One Chapter 16: Dazzling ago
Volume One Chapter 17: A Quest after Requests ago
Volume One Chapter 18: Family Bonds ago
Volume One Chapter 19: The Oath ago
Volume One Chapter 20: The Terror of Silence ago
Volume One Chapter 21: A Dance of Minds ago
Volume One Chapter 22: Back Into the Dark ago
Volume One Chapter 23: Returning ago
Volume One Chapter 24: Rising Rush and Descending Doldrums ago
Volume One Chapter 25: Slumbering under a Great Mountain (Side Story) ago
Volume One Chapter 26: Fisticuffs (Side Story) ago
Volume One Chapter 27: Perfect Peridot *Bday Cntst Ancemnt* ago
Volume One Chapter 28: The Class I have Chosen ago
Volume One Chapter 29: Class Paths ago
Volume One Chapter 30: Appearances ago
Volume One Chapter 31: More About Appearances ago
Volume One Chapter 32: Determining My Path ago
Volume One Chapter 33: Serious Consideration ago
Volume One Chapter 34: A Decision to Make ago
Volume One Chapter 35: The Hatching Process ago
Volume One Chapter 36: Without Regret ago
Volume One Chapter 37: Managing Their Hatching ago
Volume One Chapter 38: Like a Pool of Water ago
Volume One Chapter 39: Movement ago
Volume One Chapter 40: First Meal ago
Volume One Chapter 41: Acclimatization ago
Volume One Chapter 42: Color Shock ago
Volume One Chapter 43: Terabethia's Tale Part 1 ago
Volume One Chapter 44: Terabethia's Tale Part 2 ago
Volume One Chapter 45: Terabethia's Tale Part 3 ago
RCF: Taking a Hiatus ago
Hiatus Update ago
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Uncle Woody
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Great prologue, but disappointing later on.

Story started out great, loved the prologue. But it had sadly turned into a info dump in quite a few chapters. I’m a patient reader, and the way you’re treating the people reading your story isn’t making this any better. Anywho, back to the subject at hand. 30 chapters. Been a year-ish. And the story hasn’t even progressed. I mean really? And the fact that you keep releasing info dumps instead of progressing the story makes it even worse. I was happy to see it start getting updated, thinking it would progress. But nope. Just info dumps. Unfollowing. Been a sad ride.

 

Grammar = 4,5 Few mistakes, but great otherwise.

Characters were great = 4,5

Story = 1 Due to no progression, but useless info dumps.

Style = 1,5 (Just to be nice, but I'd rate that 1 too.)

 

Ivanator The Great
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I am EGGING you to STOP trolling!

The life of an egg.

 

Style:

The EGG rolled over as the stories goes on.

 

Story: 

What do we have here! EGGS that are no ordinary EGGS because they are dragon EGGS? these EGGS also have different coloring! not only that but telephatic dragon EGGS? what more could you ask for?!

 

Grammar:

Decent 

 

Characters:

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Found the wrongly spelled EGG yet?

 

 

 

 

 

 

robi
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wtf happened to this story

this is one of the stories i had high hopes for, but author utterly destroyed it. half a year ago i would give this story 4-4.5 stars and would even rank it amongst best stories on this site, but…

 

grammar and characters were done rather good, and beginning of the story was good. but then story halted, POV changed to MCs brother and it all went downhill. i have read newer chapters and it seems like author still hasnt learned anything or is just trolling readers. it seems before MC hatches or something happens in story you will know story of MCs brother, MCs cousin, story of villager A, villager D, lifestory of the worm on other side of the planet, but you will get no main plotline story progress

 

author updates this story quite irregularly, and when he does it is short sidestory chapter. i wouldnt mind sidestories if author updated this more regularly and plot has moved from dead point.

 

anyways dropping this cause i dont want to wait another year for MC to actually do smth.

KK2
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Lots of interesting ideas and concepts, but horrible execution

The story starts of just fine, the concepts and ideas presented are interesting, and I still plan to read any new chapters that come out in hopes that the author will go somewhere with the story.

That said, the pacing is absolutely terrible.

Super slow and devolved into a massive infodump with seemingly random and poorly justified timeskips and flashbacks that do not develop the story. Not even the author seems to be able to keep track of the nonsensical time skips. Random characters and new PoVs are introduced that don't add anything to the story or even develop the characters even though they are long enough to span multiple chapters.

Author seems to like trolling readers with promises of development, then goes and writes a chapter with no actual new development, just rehashes of what we already know.  Story could easily be 1/3rd the length it is with the same development. Such a shame really, since the story seems like it actually has good ideas and concepts.

Grammar is readable.

 

EDIT - 7/1/16 - I guess something is finally happening now? Maybe? Still slower than molasses.

fanc
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Like many have said, there is no plot.

Despite people telling the author that there is no plot for many chapters, they continue to drop chapter after chapter of nothing. There is maybe a story for the first couple chapters, but nothing after that.

peach
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The story starts out good, then it becomes the longest info dump I've read, then the story picks up again for a few chapters, then the story starts all over again in another character's point of view. For the 20+ chapters that are out right now, there is little plot. It is hard to read and the plot is going nowhere compared to its length so far.

What's been written so far should be condensed to a third of its current total. In other words, you (the author) should plan your stories ahead of time in the future, and not just wing it like you've said you were doing. The first few chapters that you planned for actually read well, so I know it could be better.

omnerabdator
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MR Fluffy Fluff Fluff San

The Story started out so awesome in the first chapter i stayed for the other 32 chapters of pure fluff. The author is a pure troll to his readers its ridiculous. The egg phase at mose should of been 10 chapters not 32, and it shows no sign of stopping yet, just got 4 chapters of info dumps which could of been put into half of page...at this point i think the author is just laughing at all his followers and is trolling everyone

 

DO NOT READ 

Cruxio
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The Story that will break your heart,soul, and expectations

VERY misleading beginning and infinitely near 0 plot mixed up with pent up emotions and near diabolical cliche scenarios. Most of the plot can be summarized in three words, reincarnation, dragon, drama.

You better read the genre tags first before assuming/expecting anything. The story is ok the way it is but you would be very frustrated by it's development because of the most ingenious prologue you will ever see.

No template characters, you would almost wish there are.

A lot of background characters with no depth

The style is optimal albeit a little rigid

Grammar works fine

What world is round.

Characters are pretty much dramatic. What do you expect? This a story about an egg.

After waiting for a year, you would almost want to cut out the beginning up to the point of reincarnation and make a fan fiction based on it.

 

Nezercabukril
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I Quite like this, keep up the good work.

This gives a unique view of heros and demonlords through the eyes of a supporter. Who is actually stronger than said hero. Its only the begining 3 chapters but it has already captured my attention and become a favorite.

bringiton265
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Fluff, fluff, and More Boring Fluff.

Style:

The author uses a style I actually find myself using when I stop trying to write in a more formal way. He seems to use turns of phrase that people don't usually use while writing unless it is specifically in dialogue. It flows well enough until at certain times the words become a jumbled mess due to turns of phrases not necessarily being well suited to text.  While I can picture some people enjoying reading a story without the rigidity of a more formal writing style, most people probably will think that it becomes muddled when even the third person narrator seems to use this style as well.

Story:

After the prologue the story is non-existent. Don't read this if you are looking for anything more than people talking to each other and the author expounding on consciousness and how he believes a newborn learns about the world if they can't experience it directly. The fiction has currently been around for a year with no story so don't expect anything in the near future if the past year has indicated anything. We have seen maybe four named characters outside of the main ones and only in very small side stories, only two of which seem like they will have any impact if the story ever actually continues.

Grammar:

The grammar actually isn't that bad. The author definitely isn't using a spellcheck and doesn't seem to be PRing it but for the most part the mistakes in spelling don't throw off the story.

Characters:

Nothing here either. The only person we really have more than a superficial understanding of is the MC and that's only because of the 26+ chapters of him rambling without really doing anything at all. The star for characters is only from the prologue and the rambling.

Final thoughts:

Don't read it. Even as a time waster its boring. No action at all. No story at all. No character development at all. There really isn't anything here. And in response to many of his original readers leaving due to the lack of anything happening the author has taken the attitude of a vindictive child. Purposely writing troll chapters to show all those people that dared criticizing him. If an author responds to criticism by not only ignoring it but actively making his story worse to somehow get back at the people who actually enjoyed the only 'story' aspect then its probably not a story or an author that is going anywhere. The time that could have been used either working on the story or at least self-analyzing it and thinking of where things started to veer off course was instead used to troll the fans of the actual story. It just leaves a bad taste in my mouth when a perfectly reasonable premise is ruined due to the author not liking criticism of what has become a stale and completely pointless story.

I actually remember in chapter 24 where the author indicated that the story would begin in the next chapter. Instead we got a side story and eight more chapters of rambling by the MC where he analyzes a summary given in a previous chapter.

 

TL;DR
Don't read it.