Re: Progenitor

by Sagen

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Psychological Romance Tragedy
Warning This fiction contains:
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A famous mountain climber with skills untold dies due to a massive avalanche. Follow this man as he is reincarnated as a beast who is more than meets the eye.
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NaoSou
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This deserves more attention

I love this. I was a bit skeptical at first, considering how silly the idea sounds initially. Someone reincarnating as "the abominiable snowman", even though it is just a species of fantasy Yeti.

 

But the author gives life to the story. The balance of action filled scenes with the self discovery that the MC goes through is excellent. The way he juggles his human mind with his beast mind is also a nice touch.

 

The last chapter, chapter 5, finally got the story to the point where I was waiting for. That world finally had its first contact with the out wordly beast that is The Abominable Snowman, a creature as smart as a human, with a life time of knowledge, the body with physical abilities to make a dragon jealous and a special power that I won't mention, read if you want to know.

 

I can barely wait for the next episode, and this work gets a spot on my list of favorites that I check daily waiting for an update. Thanks for this amazing drug of a story and congratulations, Sagen.

GoGet
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This has something to it!

I like it, I’m gonna stalk it, keep it up!

 

You are my new fix.

biotiz
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He is Abominable and you gotta love em!

 I love this story.  He is an abominable snowman with an big kitty cat and stray elf.  I would really love to give the story a 5 star review because of the entertainment value but that would put it into the master piece level.  There are some stories that I can recognize and there are some that I look for every day.  Abominable is one that I look for.

Ghostpizza
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 Finally a story that can get me hooked with the prologue. Both this and Legend of sagen vent have me hooked

Demon
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The flow, pace and death

To be honest the first few chapters were clearly interesting but after chapter 7 (Prognetior) the flow of the story drops off for me. It’s seams rather rushed and forcing the story to change to say. It lost my focus after chapter 7 and concluded there. Reading the following chapters the story literally died for me.

Reading threw 7 and upwards gives the impression you decide a different approach to the story then anything. I didn’t really mind many of the changers to the MC during said chapter, its just the fact the ‘flow’ or pace to say it drastically changed in my impression.

You’ve introduced several other characters and even did different POV’s for them then all of a sudden chapter 7 then it feels for naught.

 

Sure you may use this interaction in some further plot development but my impression is greatly lowered. It honestly feel’s like a story where the MC leads a mercenary company then suddenly must lead a army against the demon king without any plot development or a farmer who suddenly is announced as the air to the throne without any establishment of plot between the farmer and royalty.  

- I’m out, no longer worth my attention

 

BTW: The reason which chapter 7 is highlighted here is because it is the primary focus point of change with the story.

Sriper
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It was all fun and games, fights and adventures, big yeti throwing snowballs and ice.

And suddenly, he is a killing machine that can only know death in the future or he will stop being himself….

 

Why make him a climber and start in a mountain if NOTHING of that matters now???