Hunter Markell

by Harven

Original Action Drama Martial Arts Sci-fi Virtual Reality Tragedy
Warning This fiction contains mature content
A family embarks on a journey of transformation. A mega corporation pursues the creation of groundbreaking technology. A third party bides its time in the shadows, waiting for the opportune moment to strike.


Their journey stemmed from choices made due to a single individual - Hunter Markell, a young man who was involved in a car accident and is currently laying comatose. His very existence, without his knowledge, has set the precedence for the changes that is about to overcome the world.


Hunter too, will undergo a change. His eventual awakening will draw all the players to him like moth to a flame and the result will be cataclysmic.


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READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED.
(Reading the A/N & Thinking Log thread is also highly advisable)
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BlissForgotten
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Intriguing. Still early, but I am definitely willing to give this four stars. Very visual, not much in the way of grammar or spelling mistakes and interesting setting.

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An story that is different from everything else I have seen in the past. I am looking forward to how the story will further develop and how Hunter will act. Only problem I have with it is the lack of focus on Hunter but I feel that will become more prominent in the future.

AMP
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When I first read the synopsis I thought it would be your usual VR fiction but it was a pleasant surprise.The way the author mixes several themes and themes into one while keeping it incredibly interesting is impressive. I think it deserves a "thriller" tag as well because of how well it is written and planned out. 

The way the characters grow s they prepare for what's coming is impressive as well.

PRESSit
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Style: Clean. Effective. Easy on the eyes.

 

Story: Unapologetic, creepy and intriguing. Fascinating. But well remains realistic. You fear for the characters and see through their eyes. 

 

Language: Some awkward phrasing here and here, but I doubt most are going to notice it. Great use of language and variation.

 

Character: Character-development is well-planned. The progression of the plot induces mystery, wonder, fear and admiration, which is a mark of great characters. Well done. Characters are varied, detailed, quirky and come to life. Great application of experience and description.

 

Well recommended.

Get NTR
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STOP AND READ THIS NOW

This is easily the BEST story I have read outdoing LMS, Mushoku Tensei, and every fiction and LN I have ever read

Style 5/5

The writing style is clean, easy to read and understand, and from what i’ve seen it’s utterly flawless. The way everything is written seems planned out and proffesional and makes me curious on how much this author has written in the past. Props to AMP who brought me here. (If you’re reading this thanks!)

Story 5/5

Easily one of the best stories I have ever read, the plot isn’t too crazy but it still is interest inducing. From the multiple POV’S this story is written from, the author has created a story which is fascinating yet “believable.” The plot so far has been flowing smoothly I look forward to the future events. I kinda want more on Lara’s POV though. :3

Grammar 5/5

I haven’t noticed any grammar errors at all and each sentence sounds natural. Props to the proofreader and author for making such a flawless story.

Character 5/5

Each character is believable and doesn’t seem like a stepping stone to move the plot forward. The main character isn’t super OP yet and still feels like someone relatable. Every character acts rationally and doesn’t do anything super crazy or irrational.

Should you Read This?

HELL FUCKING YES THIS STORY IS THE SHIT

If you don’t read this you are stupid

If you don’t like this go die in a hole

P.S. this story is for mature reading and contains violence and sexual content (The NSWF parts are good!)

P.P.S. The MC should take the harem route and marry multiple girls like in Mushoku Tensei <3

P.P.P.S. Stop reading this and read the story damnit!

P.P.P.S. Holy hell look at dat update rate