Insania Online

by Warhawx

Original Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Romance Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Slice of Life Virtual Reality

Welcome to the world of Insania, a game where you can play however you want! An expansive world ruled by a top tier AI capable of accommodating each and every player and their needs!

Here we follow the story of Richard, and his avatar, the golem Gondorrer, as he comes and plays a MMO in one of the most dificult ways for no other reason than a sudden impulse, and fail miserably a few times before finally getting it right.

Follow him in his adventures, composed by epic monster battles, custom made equipments, bad jokes, not right in the head friend, along with an unhealthy addiction to Monster Hunter, lots of rolling and window-balls!
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Okay, this is my first story here and it will probably be full of errors and such since my native language is portuguese, but any and all (constructive) critics are welcome.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - New game (press start) ago
Chapter 2 - Window-ball ago
Chapter 3 - Nemesis ago
Chapter 4 - Boredom ago
Chapter 5 - So what? ago
Chapter 6 - Rewards and lessons ago
Chapter 6.5 - Dawn of a legend ago
Chapter 7 - Lootless ago
Chapter 8 - Window-ball, the return ago
Chapter 9 - MMORPG for dummies ago
Chapter 10 - Lynx Rush ago
Sidestory 1.1 - Ice fox ago
Sidestory 1.2 - Ice fox ago
Insania Races (recommendations go here) ago
Chapter 11 - Beginner's luck ago
Chapter 12 - Crystals, how do they work? ago
Chapter 13 - Triple Trouble ago
Sidestory 1.3 - Ice fox ago
Chapter 14 - Stuff of the myths ago
Chapter 14.5 - Fury of the righetous ago
Chapter 15 - Cityscape ago
Chapter 16 - Crafting, gods and lovebirds ago
Chapter 17 - Pioneering ago
Chapter 18 - Oldmen and their tests ago
Chapter 19 - Trying archer ago
Chapter 20 - Bandit teasing ago
Chapter 21 - Nin-Nin! ago
Chapter 22 - (tentative) Rivalry ago
Chapter 23 - Lazy Science ago
Sidestory 2.1 - Runic path ago
Chapter 24 - Cute, but deadly ago
Chapter 25 - Escalation ago
Chapter 26 - The first hunt (part one) ago
Chapter 27 - The first hunt (Part Two) ago
IMPORTANT: not a chapter ago
Chapter 28 - Freezing soul ago
Chapter 28.5 (Fight only, no plot here) ago
Chapter 29 - Pets, as in plural ago
SS 2.2 - Runic path ago
Chapter 29.5 - Growing Legend ago
Chapter 30 - Window-stick Gaiden, Ronin's fury ago
Chapter 31 - Chaotic neutral ago
Chapter 32 - Back to tinkering ago
Chapter 33 - Reunion ago
Chapter 34 - THIS IS... ago
SS 2.3 - Runic Path ago
Chapter 35 - Fish wrestling and Sushi ago
Chapter 36 - Stay classy ago
Chapter 37 - It's dungeon time! ago
Chapter 38 - Dangerous reference ago
Chapter 39 - Dressed for war ago
Chapter 40 - The best cure ago
Chapter 41 - Window-ball, Avenging Window-stick ago
Chapter 42 - IT'S ALIVE! ago
SS 2.4 - Runic path ago
FF 1 - Ruby ago
Chapter 43 - (Insert new title here) ago
Chapter 44 - Window-ball strikes back ago
Chapter 45 - Final preparations! ago
Chapter 46 - Starting with a blast! ago
Chapter 47 - Soldier's rage ago
Cross over - WGO (Gon's side) PART 1 ago
Chapter 48 - I'm a happy golem! ago
Chapter 49 - Explosive issues ago
Chapter 50 - Break the unbreakable ago
Chapter 51 - Crystal breaker ago
Chapter 52 - Wave event ago
Chapter 53 - Here, doggy, doggy ago
Q & A Edition 1.5 ago
Chapter 54 - Return of Dogsbane ago
Chapter 55 - Villain in the making? ago
Chapter 56 - Yuu's happy day ago
Chapter 57 - Almost as planned ago
Chapter 58 - Crafter's pet ago
Chapter 59 - Crafted pet ago
Cross over - WGO (Gon's side) PART 2 ago
Chapter 59.5 - Repercursions of a villain( in the making)? ago
Chapter 60 - New old acquaitances. ago
SS 3.1 - Dadventures ago
Chapter 61 - Wargon gets angry ago
chapter 62 - Let sleeping commanders lie ago
chapter 63 - A familiar(?) face. ago
Chapter 64 - Meeting an idol ago
Chapter 65 - Madman's logic ago
Chapter 66 - Farming Wyvern ago
Chapter 67 - The other culprit ago
chapter 68 - Scolding ago
chapter 68.5 - A cyclops' woes ago
Chapter 69 - Lord Wich ago
Chapter 70 - Brazilian Greeting (NOT!) ago
Chapter 71 - He who controls Yuu... ago
Chapter 72 - Hurting feet ago
Chapter 73 - Backflippin' good ago
Chapter 74 - Going shopping ago
Chapter 75 - sMALL adventures ago
Chapter 76 - The petting master ago
Chapter 77 - Long lost twins ago
Chapter 78 - Meaning of Shinobi ago
Chapter 79 - The name that should not be spoken ago
Chapter 80 - The Dark days of the General ago
Chapter 81 - [WARGON hurt himself in his confusion] ago
Chapter 82 - Window-ball Genesis ago
Chapter 83 - How to deal with a womanizer ago
Chapter 84 - Take off! ago
Chapter 84.5 - Trickster and Tamer ago
SS 0100.1 - Synthetic God ago
Chapter 85 - Friendly(?) rivalry ago
Chapter 86 - Problem with genders ago
Chapter 87 - Friendly talk ago
Chapter 88 - Fox on the hunt ago
Chapter 89 - Sing along ago
SS 0100.2 - Synthetic God ago
Chapter 90 - Pirate rumble ago
Chapter 91 - Yuu's reward ago
Chapter 92 - Sobering up ago
Chapter 93 - Not-so-fluffy Cold ago
Chapter 94 - Sunday bloody Sunday ago
Chapter 95 - Modern samurai??? ago
Chapter 96 - Civil war ago
Chapter 97 - Scoop ago
Chapter 98 - Bombs in a carriage ago
Chapter 99 - Out of the frying pan... ago
Chapter 100 - ...and into the fire, then... ago
Warhawx's X-mas X-Over X-pecial (Part 1/3) ago
Chapter 101 - Ice cream? ago
102 - Magma-Arachnophobia (Battle chapter) ago
Chapter 102.5 - Broken Wings ago
Q & A 2nd Edition ago
Chapter 103 - BREAK TIME! ago
Chapter 104 - Of Cookie! ago
Chapter 105 - Shared property ago
Chapter 106 - How to traumatize a cat ago
Chapter 107 - Armor for a Princess ago
Chapter 107.5 - 401 ago
HIATUS ANNOUNCEMENT ago
Chapter 108 - Smelting Spiders ago
Chapter 109 - Stop! Hammer time! ago
Chapter 110 - (Not) Status (table) Report ago
Chapter 111 - Calling it a day ago
Chapter 112 - Student's life ago
Chapter 113 - The correct Theme-song ago
Chapter 114 - Gon Vs Ghost ago
Chapter 115 - Group Hug ago
Chapter 116 - Life on the other side ago
Chapter 116.5 - Birth of the Savior ago
Sidestory 5.1 -Edgar Von Pond (April's Fools Response) ago
Chapter 117 - Master, apprentices and pet ago
Chapter 118 - Pet Spa ago
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P1k4ch6
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Long live Cygnass :D

This story has been one of the most funny stories in this whole page. Story progresses nicely, characters are fun and unique, and the style of writing...like said absolutely hilarious >_<

Totally like authors way of writing of how Wargon thinks and behaves when situations arrise. That fellow totally does things how he likes and doesn't care what others think.

MC is not OP at all but grows slowly but surely though hard work.

 

So if you like a story with good humour, nice action with fighting monster (MonHun theme), crazy behaviour and sweet characters....this  so is your pick for reading...

 

Ah yes final things....All hail CYGNAS :D

Truthz
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Enjoyable, needs a bit of work

I enjoy the story. I understand the need to do your own thing and getting caught up in something so completely, that you just forget about everything else (*cough*Class*cough*).  I also like stories where technique can overpower stats.

Characters are fun, (I want a Cygnas and Aura) Nin-nin. Some times get lost in who is an NPC and who isn't, though I'm pretty sure most of the people up till now have been NPC's Nin-nin.  MC needs more player on player interaction (yuu) Nin-nin.

 

Grammar needs a bit of work.  Some of it is just typos, but there are many cases where words are in the wrong tense or are used with the wrong contraction.  There are also cases of sayings that get fumbled up, though the mistakes are fairly minor as it's easy to understand the underlying intention.

In conclusion, good work, just needs someone to go over it.

weeb--king
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Really enjoying the premise so far, some grammar mistakes but completely readable, thanks for writing and i hope to see a lot more!

lorenzo86
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I laughed , cheered and smiled alot readin this, it 's great not only you get real attached to the caracters if brightens your day :)

Khartus
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Im enjoying it so far

Applying the concept of another game in VR is a first, and dicovering the method to do so is a blast thus far, so continue the good work ^^

Redfish
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Slow beginning, but well worth sticking with

 I put this one down (so to speak) a few times, but ended up coming back.  The beginning seemed drawn out to me, however by sticking with it I discovered a wonderfully written fiction full of humour and realistic adventure + character development. Definitely a high quality story full of humour that stands a cut above the rest.

 

Long live the lieutenant!

Jamerax
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In the way to greatness..(see what I did there?)

A good story so far, very humorous and the pace is perfect. however grammar really gets under my skin. your continued use of ‘IN’ instead of ‘ON’ is really waking the Grammar Nazi in me. I mean it just keeps happening! aside from that the Grammar is acceptable which is why i gave it an average score.  

Also Skirmisher? really? that name is just ugh. ? why not Weapon Master or Vanguard. 

I will give you 3.5 stars because the comedy is rather well thought out. Oh and character score does not just represent MC but the SS MC as well..

 

unkxz
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I'm in love now.

Cygnas is <3 Cygnas is life.

Kruncs
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Keeps me laughing and wanting more

Absolutely loving this story, it is that simple. It starts a bit slow and Wargon is introduced to us and we learn some of his odd habits, but I was laughing the whole time so completely satisfied. This series is in my Top 5 easily. :)

Aznboychris10
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Good Humor and Great Characters

The humor shown in this fan-fiction should be an example of what some fan-fictions need other than continuous battles. 

 

The characters make me laugh and some actions produce some giggles that people would question.