Insania Online
by Warhawx
Welcome to the world of Insania, a game where you can play however you want! An expansive world ruled by a top tier AI capable of accommodating each and every player and their needs!
Here we follow the story of Richard, and his avatar, the golem Gondorrer, as he comes and plays a MMO in one of the most dificult ways for no other reason than a sudden impulse, and fail miserably a few times before finally getting it right.
Follow him in his adventures, composed by epic monster battles, custom made equipments, bad jokes, not right in the head friend, along with an unhealthy addiction to Monster Hunter, lots of rolling and window-balls!
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Okay, this is my first story here and it will probably be full of errors and such since my native language is portuguese, but any and all (constructive) critics are welcome.
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Loving the story, keep it up!
I'm really looking forward to what he will craft from excellent rank materials.Â
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I also think that he should learn more utility skills. There was a fan fiction where the main character used "Survival Cooking" skill at master level to create monster pills from cooking their essence to gain permanent resistances, skills, stats, and other goodies.
You don't have to follow these footsteps, but I do feel that as long as he is hunting alone and manually skinning the carcasses, he should harvest more than just the hide, claws, and teeth.Â
I almost all fictions, a dead dragon's body is a treasure trove of crafting items from hide, bones, and organs for armor to the flesh for power ups.
Plus, if Golem intends to hunt Bosses alone, he needs to be self sufficient. So skills like Cooking, Gathering, Mining, Smithing, Leather Working, Alchemy, (maybe) Enchanting, etc. will be necessary.
Seems like a self insert.
Reviewed at: Chapter 95 - Modern samurai???
The MC seems to be a self insert, but honestly for a VRMMO story it is pretty good for a bit.
The MC is a golem and solo fights big monsters.
The story and writing are okay. The grammar is okay.
It's kinda like reading an anime sometimes. You might like it, try it out.
gotta love the uploading speed
i love the story so far even though it's been done before you give it a bit of a fresh feeling.
and now a small rhyme:
WINDOW BALL SHALL CONQUER ALL. ~xtremeloldude 2015
Keeps me laughing and wanting more
Absolutely loving this story, it is that simple. It starts a bit slow and Wargon is introduced to us and we learn some of his odd habits, but I was laughing the whole time so completely satisfied. This series is in my Top 5 easily. :)
It's comedy - don't take it seriously.
If you don't take this story seriously, and your brain can auto-grammar-correct every now and then; you'll very much enjoy reading this.Â
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it says last update is 52 days ago... any news? is it dropped?
one of the very good story
verry good story intersting and make you want more but dude game that equipment give more point than skill is quiet stupid idea
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even if i time travel to the past and steal excalibur from king arthur i wont be king arthur touh
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and dude farm from boss? are you playing console game or something? or maybe dragon nest ?Â
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what is the reality rate from the game? 50 %? how come you farming a boss monster?
its like you said that 100 napoleon will be born each year or everyone is as genius as albert einstein will come every day creating theory this and theory that or everyone as mad as tesla and will claim that they will create free electricity for everyone in da world
Fun , hilarious
I laughed , cheered and smiled alot readin this, it 's great not only you get real attached to the caracters if brightens your day :)
Long live War
I enjoy the story alot. Characters are interesting and have a good growth. The spelling is a little of but as English isn't his first language it is well written
A great time
Reviewed at: Chapter 84 - Take off!
This was one of the first stories I ever read here here on royalroadl.com, and it's still one of my favorites. It's been living rent free in my head for awhile, so I decided to come back and re-read it again!
The characters are hilarious, especially when they are bouncing off of each other. The sheer amount of chaos that happens when you have a friend group that really knows each other well, and have real chemistry is extremely hard to portray, but absolutely beautiful when pulled off like you have.
I alway appreciated the actual damage numbers in combat, making the fights feel like they have actual progress, instead of a "whack each other until the story says someone dies".
The focus on crafting and all the references to Monster Hunter and it's playstyle have actually inspired me to try MH for myself, and I absolutely love the series!
Sorry I know this is a little rambling, but I can't really figure out how to express my love for this story (and your other ones as well). I don't know if Warkawx will ever see this, but good sir, if you do, I know a lot of people (myself included!) would be over the moon if you decided to pull this out of haitus. Regardless of what you do, I just wanted you to know how thankful I am for the work you have done for me and hundreds of other readers. Thank you Warhawx, and may your hunts be ever glorious!