Realm of Learning: Adventures of Eternium

by RajaDeva

Original Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Psychological Romance Sci-fi Harem Martial Arts Reader interactive School Life Slice of Life Supernatural Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
Life is all about enjoyment, what will happen when people are offered a second life in the new 99% real VR game, follow our protagonist in a world of swords arrows and magic as he begins his journey to become a top player in the new game of the century, while having as much fun as possible.

-Updating tables, up to chapter 6, stop reading there if it bothers you, more will be done after the 5th of June.

-I have changed a few of the things in chapter 6, I suggest you go look at the tables there.
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ShadowGunzs
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I'm just searching around to find some good VR story and i came across this FF , Its like a regular VR Story , nothing special but that's what im finding :3 , It have some merits like his character , you basically make him special among the other players and i like how you use his racial charisma :3 That's all i wanna say (I want more chapters :3 )

wolf9
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CARRY ON & good luck

Good stuff to read...........................................................
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Ok since I love this enough i'll actually make a serious review

Overall score 4.5/5

Even though the pacing is a little slow the way the author is developing his characters and their relationships is very well done and enjoyable to read. Since this is a review I would like to warn any potential readers that romance is one of the main tags and something the author develops and has made part of the story. If you're looking for a hack and slash adventure or don't like romance this probably isn't for you. My main flaw with this is that the story seems to be meandering a bit and the main character has no real objective other than to level and things like that. Maybe that's intended but that is my only complaint.

Style

The way this is written is one of the best on RR in my opinion. The story isn't too rushed and is going at a nice pace. The author develops most of the characters through showing their backround or another characters POV and is amazingly done. As one of the strongest points it is enjoyable to read every update and I hope the author keeps at this pace of development

Story 4.5/5

As said before the story seems to meander a bit with no real objective other than to do generic things like level or do quests. But, the author seems to be focusing mainly on relationships between characters which is refreshing so i'll rank it high since most authors don't do this.

Grammar 5/5

I don't usually see any grammatical or spelling errors. The story flows well and transitions are well done. Basically perfect so this isn't an area of problem.

Character 4.5/5

I would like to more about the main character and his past but the author seems to be saving that for later. All the characters act fairly rational and stick to their characters which is nice. Each character has an interesting backstory that is either developing or developed. The reason why this is 4.5/5 is that i'm curious about why the MC seems so practiced on being a womanizer. (Maybe that's part of his past?) The set of characters is interesting and their are a couple unusual but fun characters that will have an effect on the story later on i'm sure. The main character isn't OP yet and may become that way but as of now albeit powerful he isn't slaughtering dragons or 1 shotting final bosses, yet.

Should you read this?

As one of my favorites I would defeinitely say yes because this author deserves it. Every chapter is interesting and the MC is likable. The grammar is flawless and it doesn't really have any main areas that are problematic. 

Extras

Out of all the stories i've read on RR this has the best sex scenes. You should read this just for those xD

Props to the author 

Fourthwall
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Looking forward to more.

I like this story a lot so far, the game system is interesting and the characters are interesting and reasonably believable. The only glaring problem I have are the massive run on sentences, which end up being full on paragraphs. Please use more fullstops instead of commas all of the time. Other than that I look forward to reading more!

Chaos Rabbit
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This story is entertaining and easy to get into. Just needs a little bit of grammar work. 

SpartanLoki
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I'm really enjoying the story a lot. Love the main character and the additional party members. Looking forward to reading more of this story, so keep it up. Thanks for the story.

gamezob
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The action is awesome!

Among these chapters is one of the best fight scenes that I have ever read, even though I don't understand half of what was said. This work of fiction has an acceptable story line, subtle world building and decent characters, but the writing, particularly the actions scenes are spectacular. Look through the tags, if the tags appeal to you, then don't pass up the opportunity to read this.

shuiko
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Story which takes good ideas, and uses them to develop a good overall story

This will be my advance review for chapters 1-34. It has met my word count.

 

First the style. The writing style is... solid, but a glaring weakness is the lack of world building. It focus too much on Character, which can be a strength but without a proper world building, its hard to connect the characters with the story itself. It feels more like we're reading a conversation between 2-3 people. It would due the author and the story well to add more world context.

 

A good part though with the style of writing is the battle and ero scenes. These are done very well so no complaints, though again adding more to the stage, developing an actual world both IRL and VR would help this story greatly, more so if planned for long term.

 

Story - Okay the story is nothing SUPER new, BUT it does have its interesting parts. What is the strength and at the same time a WEAKNESS of the story is the Main Character. At times his character feels illogical, too smooth, other times it makes sense and feels bad-ass. I believe this relates more to the fact is that it feels the MC is doing all these things to quickly, there is no build up, things just happen, and it feels disconnected from what happen 2-3 chapters ago.

 

Grammar. Solid, minor editing needed with dialogue.

 

Character - Mainly relates to my other statements. The characters SEEM interesting, but there isn't enough about them to BE interesting WITHIN the story context. We barely know anything about the world, as it feels the WORLD/SETTING itself is on the back burner. That said the potential for can be realized when author connects the Characters within the story more with the World he has created.

 

Overall there is still stuff to be improved, mainly stage setting/world building, but the foundation and ideas are there for this to go a long way.

uno
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Really enjoyable!

This fiction has been very entertaining to read! I like the MC, but I agree with what someone else said. I would like to know more about his past. Love the romance/harem so far and hopefully he ends up with a very successful harem. I can't wait for more chapters! Please continue you great work!

silverwood94
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I like how the romance/sexual element were added in the game.