Emperor Saga

by riou666

Original Action Adventure Fantasy Martial Arts Supernatural Virtual Reality
After 10 years, Emperor Saga's popularity is at its peak as the leading vrmmorpg.

Emperor Saga is VRMMORPG that combines the elements of fighting, strategy, skill, grinding, politics, and money. Every player's ultimate goal is to become an emperor. Four have already succeeded and gained fame, wealth, and power in game as well as in real life.

The story of a man journey to become the Emperor

A tale of the greatest challenger that will shaken the game history

The history of the first and the last one taking a different path.

Warning : Not the usual virtual reality stories, there are reincarnation, magic and wuxia mix in.
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: The Begining ago
Chapter 2: A Different Path ago
Chapter 3 : Emperor ago
Chapter 4 : Merchant ago
Chapter 5 : Journey at Mountain of the Fallen God ago
Chapter 6 : Dragon hunting ago
Chapter 7 : Restart (End of Prologue) ago
Chapter 8 : The New Beginning ago
Chapter 9 : Outlaw ago
Chapter 10 : Outlaw 2 ago
Chapter 11 : Survival ago
Discussion and Suggestion ago
Chapter 12 : Hundred Man Slayer ago
Chapter 13 : hundred Man Slayer part 2 ago
Chapter 13.5 : Celebrity ago
Chapter 14 : Shelter ago
Chapter 15 : BloodBrothers ago
Chapter 16 : Grinding!! ago
Notes ago
Chapter 17 : Guardian ago
Chapter 18 : Journey with Aramis ago
Chapter 19 : Journey With Aramis 2 ago
Chapter 20 : Guardian Great Feast ago
Chapter 21 : Tag Team ago
Chapter 22 : The Clan Ranker ago
Chapter 22.5 : A cat's pride ago
Chapter 23 : Aftermath ago
Chapter 24 : Chrono the Merchant ago
Chapter 25 : Chrono The Merchant 2 ago
Chapter 26 : Unexpected Quest ago
Chapter 26.5 : Return of Skull Mask ago
Chapter 27 : Finding Rubert ago
Chapter 27.5 : Ravenking ago
Chapter 28 : Resolve ago
Chapter 29 : The Grand Heist ago
Chapter 30 : Merchant ago
Chapter 31 : Cat and Mouse ago
Chapter 32 : Dawn Raid ago
Chapter 33 : March Under the Rising Sun ago
Chapter 34 : Game of Throne ago
Chapter 35 : Challenger ago
Chapter 36 : Will ago
Chapter 37 : Age of Chaos ago
Chapter 37.5 : Yggdrasil ago
Chapter 38 : A Day After ago
Chapter 39 : The New Update. ago
Chapter 40 : Preparation. ago
Chapter 41 : Logs and stones ago
Chapter 42 : Factory ago
Chapter 43 : Departure ago
Chapter 44 : The First Hurdle ago
Chapter 45 : Mess Up PLan ago
Chapter 46 : Fifteen Minutes ago
Chapter 47 : Survival ago
Chapter 48 : A Ray of Light ago
Chapter 49 : The Great Escape ago
Chapter 50 : Egil’s reinforcement ago
Chapter 51 : Disturbing Information ago
Chapter 52 : Money ago
Chapter 53 : Luck ago
Chapter 54 : One Month ago
Chapter 55 : Support Role ago
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Devourer
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You want a different kind of Adventure. Read This.

I do reviews in real life but this is the first time I'll be doing a review in online wish you could bear with me.

"I eat what I read"

 

Style = 4

The style is unorthodox but Interesting. the plot and schemes is  well coordinated and planned thus made it more interesting in every arc.  The author knows how to manipulate the ups and downs of a climax which made the story much unpredictable and better even in some parts the style only emphasize one details and lack in some parts of how to deliver it is good for expressing the something which the readers need.

 

Story = 5

Cliche VR story and have it's own pace  but it have it's own charm for making you read more and more and crave. The story development is unique in all the VR story I read, unpredictable but good  make you satisfied in every development of the story. One of the must to read  story out there and I dare you.

 

Grammar = 3.0

The grammar is not perfect but still acceptable and need improvement in some parts of the story there are misspelled words and confusing words the comprehension of details is not great, nice and good but readable and acceptable. In need of improvement but well great story.

 

Character = 4.0

The character setting is definitely good. the protagonist is not naive and arrogant but a person having a neutral personality doesn't care if he's good or bad or in short a character of practicality. Support character's are well define. The rivalry is well emphasize and over all the character is not cliche but better than good but not perfect and have potential for improvement in every arc. 

 

Iume
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Lots of action, too much coincidence in victory

Characters:  So, in the story we have a very broke MC with a failed business who is living off his savings.  To escape reality he chooses to play the game Emperor Saga.  He is so broke that his lives in the projects at a $150 rent.  I mean, this guy is way down on his luck and has $150K in debt.  He is trying to find better work, but it seems is working a laborer.  So, not too bad.

 

This is discarded.  What starts out as a possibly defining character trait à la Ark or LMS  is set aside and is only revisited when the author for what...  nothing.  It isn't even used to move the plot that much.  Instead what we find out is that this guy is someone who doesn't lose.  He's ruthless and possibly a genius.  He's a master of combat, plots, & schemes.  Okay, so this is a new defining characteristic?  I'll take it.

 

What I didn't like is that Chrono didn't evolve as a character.  Everything he is, he already was.  He just wasn't strong enough to show how awesome he is supposed to be.  Gah!

 

Chrono, those around him (both friend and enemy) are all likeable. I didn't think any character felt out of place in the story.  I could probably sum up each character with 1-2 adjectives though.  Not much depth and nothing really made me interested in them once their chapter was done with.

 

Plot:  He has several setbacks and he tries to get out of trouble many, many times.  These actions parts were very entertaining.  But, he is an idiot.  For someone who schemes he relies on high-risk, high-reward plans whose success happens because of coincidence.  Yes, it high-risk, high-reward plots make for good reading.  But success that comes from luck...  not so much.

 

The pacing is very good.  No laggard pacing and the author kept the story moving.  There were a few spots that I disliked, a lot, and just skipped to the end.  The POV of the 2 detectives IRL and the cat.  Kind of an eh....  moment.

 

Overall:  The author is pretty good at writing.  Sometimes the word choices make me feel that English is a second language.  No biggie.   But that coincidence, lack of build-up & sufficient foreshadowing to certain plot twists & events, and some contrived character stupidity caused this story to earn its rating.

 

Dagothur
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Epic in its Awesomeness

Really addictive, just that it needs PRs and the release is quite slow. But am into quality of work not quantity so basically i can wait.   But please oh please...its been 10 long days already and ive been checking twice or thrice daily... the anticipation is killing me
FrankyStein
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I have always thought the story was good enoughbefore. But then came the ‘experiments’.. Some back stories never been hinted or forshadowed before. Some plot twists even came out from nowhere unjustified pushing my suspension of disbelief to the limits. I can tell he is trying to try to add few elements to his stories. I think it is great but if not done right it makes the overall story confusing.
ZhenHui
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One of the better fanfics I have read. Interesting plots, although at the initial stage, it was not that clear what kind of story this fanfic is heading towards.   Grammar may not be perfect, but good enough to ignore the minor errors (like confusing he’s with his) here and there.
Psychedelic
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The grammar really distracts me from the whole thing. I like the plot, character, setting, and almost everything else. My main problem is that I can't enjoy them if I'm too distracted figuring out what you were trying to say about them. Miscommunication happens a lot. I know you're trying to learn English and I admire the effort, but when your work is proofread try to ask them about your faults. You'll learn quicker that way. Other than that, you've really got a creative mind and an amazing story. gl m8

shadowcerberus
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It is an interesting and refreshing story with a chaotic player as mc.?  realy like the way u write and the story is realy addictive it is one of the favorites of mine.Because the mc is chaotic there are a lot of fight stories with players and lot of pvp .it is refreshing to see mc fight waves of player and beating them with strategies and the way he uses the terrain to his advantece is really amazing.?n my opinion he is the definition of chaotic good.
Swey
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at the beginning i dont know wher he will take the story ... now its began to shine ... did you read it?
strkr2115
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Hope to see more update soon and thank you for the great FF.
ChaoticRaven
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Oh my! Just wanted to say...

I only recently got into FFs, but this is one of my favorites. I just wanted to say thanks for your hardwork! Keep it up!! :)