Twisted Nerves

by Kiyuta

Original Action Horror Romance Sci-fi Tragedy Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
After having payed her weekly visit to her psychiatric, Lia heads home while thinking about her mother and Dr. Kris' proposition. Playing a game. Of course it's no normal game, it is the first Virtual Reality MMORPG released by Crathos Inc., the leading company in virtual reality games. Supposedly, the game would make her world whole again. Supposedly, the game would take away the boredom that is her life.

""".. I guess I could give it a try; when was the last time I felt any excitement?"

I'm going to move this story on my site in the future, for now check out my other stories already there! https://zekkuhakukiyuta.wordpress.com/
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Kiyuta

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue - part one: Up to date with the world ago
Prologue - part two: Blind Emotions ago
Level 1: Welcome to Hyria ago
Level 2: Idiosyncrasy ago
Level 3: Idiosyncrasy II ago
Level 4: The school and the dojo ago
Level 5: Training ago
Level 6: Ghillo Forest ago
Level 7: Mysterious cave ago
Level 8: Underground lake ago
Level 9: ■■■■■■■ ago
Level 10: Pandora (+Lia's image and theme song) ago
Level 11: Welcome to Hyria II (+Abigail's image) ago
Level 12: Journey ago
Level 13: Magiron Kingdom ago
Level 14: On the road ago
Level 15: Past & Present (+Abigail's theme song) ago
Level 16: Fealty (+Miranda's image and theme song) ago
Level 17: The Lovers ago
Level 18: Oblitus Mori I ago
Level 19: Oblitus Mori II ago
Level 20: Fuji's Catacomb (+Hyria's map) ago
Level 21: Nyarlathotep ago
Level 22: Meeting up ago
Reboot 1: The Dragon Slayer ago
Reboot 2: Mesmerized ago
Reboot 3: The Oldest Dreamer ago
Reboot 4: Maitreya ago
Reboot 5: School ago
Reboot 6: Woh Empire ago
Reboot 7: Work (+List of Characters) ago
Reboot 8: XVIII — The Moon ago
Reboot 9: The slave ago
Reboot 10: Bloodstained freedom ago
Reboot 11: A tale of six trillion years and a night ago
Reboot 12: Yuki (+Yuki's image) ago
Voyage 1: Planning ago
Voyage 2: Traveling ago
Voyage 3: Yinyue Empire ago
Voyage 4: Beast-kin Village ago
Voyage 5: Scary Sprites I ago
Voyage 6: Scary Sprites II ago
Voyage 7: Back to traveling (+Merry Christmas) ago
Voyage 8: Xin Jen ago
Voyage 9: Constructions I ago
Voyage 10: Constructions II ago
Voyage 11: Departure ago
Voyage 12: Normalcy ago
Voyage 13: Tranquil Times ago
Voyage 14: Turbulent Times ago
Voyage 15: Falling off ago
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diabolique21
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Fix the problem with loading it updats nut no new shit need more Good work  
ArchmageNaoki
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Keep it up , i like your MC she's cute~ , i want moar of it~
Recoyle
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A dream trip to hell... And back, hopefully

If you think you've seen everything the virtual world has to offer, then you're most definitely wrong! Accompany Twisted Nerves' heroine, Lia, and her friends in the chaotic journey they're going to make in the world of Hyria. A journey full of adventure and excitement, but also filled to the brim with blood and danger. Plus a bit of gore and madness, and just a touch of 'Yuck!'. Don't worry, you'll see what I mean. Long story short... I'm looking forward to what Kiyuta will bring out next, and so should you!
Sylth
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Liked it till end of volume 1

In all seriousness you could have continued the way you wrote before in the same style as volume 1 decided to quit reading after the horror part sorry. I feel like your trying to develop an original story instead making it worst than before. My advice is if you want to create a original story try to make a Virtual world with different set of rules there are a few good ones that doesn't follow the rules of RRL

Blockturtle
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This fiction is an awsome peice that was clerly thoguht out when it was first written. I love the MC, and the lesbian love that you added onto the story where Lia gets toghether with Abigail. Overall this entire story gets my heart pumping, and blood boiling.

 

The fact tht she is considered as pandora's reincarantion is actually quite fitting for the Lia. Since her basicly being a sociopath makes her suited for that sort of role. thoguh I do find it disapointing that Lia does not show much, if any, afection for Abigail past volume 2.

 

I honestly enjoyed this story, and would recomed it to anyone other than the coled minded.

zanaria
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Not formatted correctly

There are broken tags everywhere in the story. Usually ones like [ / tbody ]

omnerabdator
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this series was so good, then volume 2 happened and then the author poured rape and torture everywhere, ruining the whole thing for me.

Cant believe they were even allowed to sell a game like that...total bullshit

pantiadjie
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another weed story clone itseems....

the good thing about weed story style is ...i can  skip a lot of useless thing like explanation about skill  item...inventory detail about 200 slot or so....well just amateur working is like this....just abother clone of weed...no originality.....-____-

leonessa
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la storia ke hai scritto è bella,m ma meglio i power ranger.....