Immortal Soul

by Mike777ac

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Michael has been around a long time, a very long time. He has been reincarnated more times than he can possibly remember, and picked up a few tricks along the way. Intimately knowing Heaven, Hell, and pretty much everything in between, he was born into a fantasy world. Will he have a long happy life, or a disappointingly short and painful one? Either way, at least it should be entertaining.

[Warning: Contains graphic violence, nudity, mature content, some sexual content (In the later volumes), and relatively dark or crude humor!]

[Disclaimer: This is a fairly long story, and covers many controversial topics. It is almost entirely written in first person past perspective, and from multiple point of views. There are several """"Main"""" characters, and each of them is significant to the plot.]

Related fiction => """"Questing"""" Link => https://mike777ac.wordpress.com/questing/
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emmdouge
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I originally thought this story was a 5/5. But after switching to another pov for a few long chs, The story loses its luster and feels like you’re like you’re reading a long filler. The worst part is that at some point, you start to feel disconnected with the mc. More importantly, the story starts to feel like an informative essay about an mc that’s already lived his current life and is just recounting what happened. The author is a really good writer though. He/she just needs to learn to give up a little control of her story and leave it to the reader’s imagination. The reader doesn’t need to know everything that goes on when the mc is not present. It would have been better to hold on to that information to surprise the reader later on. There are a lot of times where you’ll be reading and ask yourself, “Did I really need to know this?” Superfluous details abound within this fiction, which is a double-edged sword in this case. All in all, I would still recommend everyone to read this. Unique story and relationships between characters are what kept me reading personally. The funny thing is ,among the superfluous information, a lot of key explanations are missing. This wouldn’t be a bad thing, but because its so far along and written in first person, it really irritates you that certain characters haven’t been explained yet. Rant over! :) have fun reading!

JF41C0N
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After spending almost a week doing nothing more than reading fanfictions on royalroad, I can say without any doubts that this one is the very best.<personal opinion> Although it has its flaws like everything else(actually, I can't think of any, but it probably has one or two), it is on a whole different level than the others, to the point where one might think its being written by a professional writer. That being said, please keep up the good work and don't let my words of praise or anyone elses hinder your efforts ;).
Kamikaze
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Good till the last sentance.

This story is by far the best reincarnation FF I have read. The characters  and story are refreshing not the cookie cutter type a lot of them follow.

Nikita
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GIVE ME MORE! I REALLY LOVE IT!
Russ0405
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Needs to be in the top 5

This is one of my favourites on this site, because It’s so well written and original too! My only complaint is that it’s not in the top 5 which isn’t even Mike’s fault  :(. THIS SHOULD AT LEAST BE IN THE TOP 5. Anyway this fiction is so good that I was recommending it to my brother 30seconds in.

Shance
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Actual current favorite FanFic... Forever!

Its a fun read with practicly limitless posibilities!

 

The world and the mechanics of how it works are described beutifully!

 

I love the Fanfic, and hope to see many more Chapters of it, if it stops, i hereby pronounce i shall cry and wear black for a month straight as a mourning ritual!

 

So keep up the good work, and thanks for writing!

 

From a Shancy Fan!

chapin145
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Really enjoying this series. I also think it would be awesome if maybe you could create a characters page that lists all of the main characters so far and who/what the are, abilities, etc (no spoilers needed but just a good descriptions so it is easier to follow in the story). Thanks
legend143
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The story is very nice.
Moridin
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Highly interesting and addicting read. Hits all points and manages to change things up enough to keep the tail interesting. Insane characters yet totally believable and even down to earth at times. I can agree with others that its all the more interesting since its not the first new life and he has all this knowledge, experience, and power that he can bring to bear.
Moridain
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Very well written story with interesting characters. I am slightly horrified at the cruel fate of the protagonist, his free will effectively gone and his soul never allowed to find peace in oblivion.   /shudder