Original Adventure Drama Romance Martial Arts Virtual Reality
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After a gruesome accident, John can't live a normal life anymore. While he's in a coma, he is offered an interesting proposal. If he can't live a normal life in the real world, maybe he could try living a good one in the virtual world. It sounds like an easy solution but things may not go as planned.
Chapter 1 and 2 can be considered prologues but I advise you to read them to get a better understanding of both the characters and the world. The story picks up after chapter 4 so if you wish to read a story with a """"slightly"""" dark main character, please be patient.
Warning! Some chapters may include : strong coarse language, violence, scenes that are suggestive of or depicting sexual intercourse, rape and ritualistic murders.
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TimorUmbra
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After a long time I finally got better and I can start writing again. Please note that because of my mood swings, my characters may appear bi-polar. My writing style may change as I go along (hopefully for the better) Hugs and kisses for everybody.

Attolis
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Original and well written.

I have to say this is much better than I expected it to be. I hope he manages to make that guild soon.
Fighnjaci
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This is what I've been looking for. Interesting story with a nice romance. I really like the idea of the AI waifu :)   Haven't noticed any grammar errors,but then again,I wasn't really looking for them. Still,if there are any they should be minor. Story is okay,I haven't seen many fictions about MC being a Beta tester so it should be interesting. Character are also fun,though MC's brother and ex-gf should go die in a fire.   Anyway,I hope to see more of it. Keep up the good work
wezard
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SORRY but every time I see your FICTION name LEGACY and NOT your character name (my bad for not stating that out) I am thinking that a new chapter from sidgard9 has come out and when I check it turns out that I was wrong from there I became sad(and angry) that you are giving me fake hope that he has returned. And I have taken that anger out on you for which I am Sorry. Also about the cheating thing it is just me still being angry. ps. 1st I know about me not being good at writing in English. 2nd They really need to repair the reply button and 3rd you really need repair the size of your words because in chapter 4 and 5 it is a real mish-mash Also here is the real review after I readed your story
fumiyu
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Creative and thought provoking

The execution of the story so far is good. Although there are grammar mistakes, it's not bad enough to say anything about it. Overall, this story can lead to a lot of possible routes and with that, I can just see it getting better and better. Keep up the good work.