Contract: Restart

by Intsik11

Original Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Psychological Tragedy Martial Arts
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
Betrayed by a close friend and beaten to death. Blake Freed is resurrected by a god under a contract in a new world with RPG like mechanics. Now the reincarnated no longer knows the word """"Trust""""(DROPPED)
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  • Pages :
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taylor9944
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It has a lot of potential

Keep up the good work i cant wait to read more

shuiko
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very interesting has its own flair

Like the story. Seems like MC could really use some romance though. Get that WIFU in there wifu wifu wifu for himmmmmmmm.

phdxr95
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love the story and the name of the village of shadow elves... hahah YUDIPUTALINTIKA ... badwords

Lunitan
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Sorry bro, keep writing and try again next time.

Bad grammar and constantly switching tenses.  The entire premise is dumb. You're telling me he was killed by FIVE dudes in college? for being the top student. Its not like being the top student effected them in any way, and FIVE people seriously, just because they were supposedly jealous? And you would think a god would, you know, provide incentives to his only follower instead of TORTURING him.

 

Nothing makes sense, and I doubt it'll get any better. Please learn to make realistic scenarios, there's more plot holes than a block of swiss cheese in a rats den. 

Ye Chun Hwa
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Still early to fully judge but its got my attention !

Who am i to judge someones hard work, the fact that this many people read the story and still read it is proof that this story is really good ! Hopefully it will get even better and continue to be released ! Good luck and thank you !

Blitflame
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A STORY THATS BRILLIANCE MADE ME WANT TO DIR

 This story made me want to kill myself...literally I read to chapter 13 and his misfortunes were so terrible and so well conveyed I felt like I was the mc I felt his emotions and I honestly felt I should die especially after those times of exceptince of death only to be forced to live. This is the only story that has stirred such strong emotions of pity and saddness that I literally considered killing myself its a brilliant masterpeice of a work. You do seem to have some slight grammar and spelling issues also hit fair and square....that is the wrong context fair and square means an action that is considered honorable and fair an example is someone steels a candy bar appropriate punishment would be in call another example is someone losses a bet and has to fork over 40 bucks it would be fair and square to just give the winner the money over the story is brilliant the main mc character while pitiful is good but I honestly don't understand how he just doesn't end himself I would have done it a long Time ago your grammar is your only flaw so I will rate that as 3 star's. Your style of writing is very unique and deserves a five star not many people can stir such emotions through me the reader.

lisianthus86
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 dark story which will ended up an op mc? well anyway i enjoy read this so i give 5 star

UndergroundJazzEnforcer
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This novel seems pretty interesting so far, but I'd have to agree that there should be some romance added into the novel to really complete it.