Ages Online

by Karides

Original Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Tragedy Virtual Reality
It is year 2034. The age of console games are over and the age of virtual reality has just begun. Yashita Corps, a Japanese company at the forefront of virtual gaming had released a new generation game called Ages Online that is said to be revolutionary among all other Virtual Reality MMORPGs.

As gamers from all over the world flock to Ages Online, Sebast Koh watch on the sidelines as he persisted in finishing the story quest for an older game Yggdrassil Online. The result was him being ostracized in class due to him being the only one not playing the new game.

As he started off in the world of Agaia friendless and one step behind the rest, Sebast, handle name Beast, thought he could find solace in power grinding up as a warrior to catch up to speed, only for bad luck to strike time and time again. May he persevere in his most dangerous journey yet.
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 0: Prologue ago
Chapter 1: Beast ago
Chapter 2: Lore ago
Chapter 3: Librarian, Historian, Babysitter ago
Chapter 4: A Level 1 Job Change ago
Chapter 5: Griefer ago
Chapter 6: Tenacity ago
Chapter 7: Monk ago
Chapter 8: Moonglow ago
Chapter 9: Shadun ago
Chapter 10: Camaraderie ago
Chapter 11: Seal of the Lord ago
Chapter 12: Antrollope ago
Chapter 13: A Chance Encounter at Tarron Hills ago
Chapter 14: Indignation ago
Chapter 15: Kiki ago
Chapter 16: Door to Nowhere ago
Chapter 17: Earth Lake ago
Chapter 18: World Change ago
Chapter 19: Savathrox the Conqueror ago
Chapter 20: Descend unto War ago
Intermission: Map of Caerheim ago
Chapter 21: Corelia ago
Chapter 22: Separate Ways ago
Chapter 23: The Saint of Loyderidge ago
Chapter 24: Detour ago
Chapter 25: West Gate ago
Chapter 26: East Gate ago
Chapter 27: East Gate II ago
Chapter 28: South Gate ago
Chapter 29: Beneath the Surface ago
Chapter 30: The Fellowship ago
Chapter α - Side-story: The Court of a King ago
Chapter 31: North Gate ago
Chapter 32: Estrangement ago
Chapter 33: Vanguard Pass ago
Chapter 34: The Princes of Honduria ago
Chapter 35: vs Alpyrius ago
Chapter 36: Commotion ago
Chapter 37: Business Deals ago
Chapter 38: Pass Go. Collect $200 ago
Chapter 39: Weapon Test ago
Ages Online Compendium & Suggestion Box ago
Chapter β – Side-story: Claret ago
Chapter 40: Loose Ends ago
Chapter 41: Blatta ago
Chapter 42: Assignment ago
Chapter 43: Pursuit ago
Chapter 44: Hazards ago
Intermission: Map of Honduria ago
Chapter 45: Hazards II ago
Chapter γ - Side-story: Ouroboros ago
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redlazyfox
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This deserves to be one of the top!!!

I actually registered here just to tell you how much  I liked the story with its setting almost similar to LMS, with mix of author's originality! To top it off with grade A ok grammar written carefully and expressed neatly!!! MC is great as not an OP character early on with promising lategame potential. Overall it is a must read,must have at top 10 ,me comparing it to other ff here at RR :D more japtem to karides!

Dzerx
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Good beginning so far.

Three Chapters released so far and I enjoyed each one. Like many others before and probably after, there are a few mistakes here and there.. but nothing major. I shall change my rating in the future if the need arises but so far I enjoyed it.

Penguette
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A gripping, and wondrous story.

Style:

I really appreciate the style of writing, it allows me to visualise the entire story as though I were watching a movie.

 

 

Story:

The storyline contains some bits of foreshadowing as to what might happen to Beast in the future, as he sets out on his journey to discover more about the owner of the tome he currently holds, and finds out about the lore and history of the continents, and how they came to be. tldr; it's really meaty and interesting, but you'll have to continue to reading overtime to understand the flavour.

 

Grammar:

Good grammar, occasional slips but it never really affects the content or expression.

 

Character:

Some of the characters are still a little lacking in terms of development, but I believe it’ll only improve overtime. I can understand why, although he is a huge fan of lore and history, Beast was annoyed about his class. He wanted the hack-and-slash potential of his original class, while enjoying the lore, and it was difficult to see how much potential the one he ended up with had, until more recently (:

 

Overall:

I created this account just to leave comments on this webnovel initially, and I love how the story is unfolding gradually. However, you might want to have a "compendium" of sorts for easy reference and reminders like the names and characters and items. Not that I mind reading from chapter 1 again!

Lord Yoshino
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December's most promising rookie

Already becoming one of the best ff in this site, some minor errors here and there but extremely fetching overall.

STYLE
Very engaging , felt like reading the novel of a professional author
STORY
if re:incarnation first monster has best MC, Long Island has one of the most unique vr setup this one has the best in-game Storyline. Very realistic and non-op scenario .
GRAMMMER
No words; cant find any faults just PERFECT
CHARACTER
the only thing author needs to focus on. Its really hard to identify with the MC. he is a nobody with no aim no identifying trait nor any quirks in personality.
bit better characters and it might become the best ff here XD.

staemme01
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You should get a proofreader

Read a bit, already noticed that you are changing between tenses, missing words and you use words where other words would be grammatically correct, for example it’s “on the path to greatness” not “in the…”. Not “…in twenty years back..” it should be “…twenty years ago…” etc. You should get a proofreader and correct your mistakes.

Fandii
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Great story, without an OP character and long chapters. Best combination :D

strike882000
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I have to say, I'm just submitting this review in order to help you out. I really like the story and the characters. An earlier post mentioned how well the pace is, I agree whole heartedly. I just wanted to help this story go further up the best rated charts, with many of my other favorites.

If you look into the reviews before trying out the story, then stop here and begin reading. You're in luck, well written, engaging and a whole lot of  fun coming your way.

Jesh
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Absolutely awesome. Honestly, i registered just to tell you how much I liked ur story.Please keep up the good work, looking forward to many more.

AziroFF
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so far is good,the plot appears to be original,the grammar is super ok,the update is fast.I don't have any complains,

Keep it going,i will root for you

eszefvsdf
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I like your story very much and I'll keep this bookmarked for future updates. I hope you enjoy your writings, its what makes stories better