Age of Heroes

by keikokumars

Original Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Historical Romance Tragedy Harem Martial Arts Slice of Life Supernatural
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Tales of great heroes that fight dragons and demons, stories of evil monster and cruel men and cunning woman, of great heroes fighting great wars, the stories of their noble life and tragic death stretched across the stars, a thousand, and a thousand more, and a thousand more, glimmers of their battles, of hope and love and their struggles
How much stories, how many battles were fought, won or lost ?


They call it the Age of Heroes


PR all ran away. Except Dok. Guess you have to bear with some of the mistakes in grammar and spelling.Not to bad,in m opinion.

Unless someone could PR 165 chapters, this is how it''s going to be.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
REVISION ago
CHAPTER 01: THE COWARD ago
CHAPTER 02: THE END FINALLY ago
CHAPTER 03: GOALS ago
CHAPTER 04: NEW BEGINNING ago
CHAPTER 05: THE BATTLE ago
CHAPTER 06: PERSPECTIVES ago
CHAPTER 07: THE FIRST STEP ago
CHAPTER 08: THE BIRTH OF THE HERO ago
CHAPTER 09: ONE STEP AT A TIME ago
CHAPTER 10: NEW ENVIRONMENT ago
REQUEST<HELP<AND OTHER STUFF ago
CHAPTER 11: THE FIVE DIVISION ago
CHAPTER 12: THE QUEST BEGINS ago
CHAPTER 13: THE LAND OF THE SUN ago
CHAPTER 14: SKINRIPPER BANDITS ago
CHAPTER 15: TUNNELS KILLING ago
CHAPTER 16: CRUELTY ago
CHAPTER 17: UNDER MARSHALL ago
CHAPTER 18: THE DAYS ARE CHANGING ago
CHAPTER 19: ALMOST ago
CHAPTER 20: ALL THESE PATHS WILL LEAD SOMEWHERE ago
CHAPTER 21: ENVY ago
MY BLOG ago
CHAPTER 22: A GLIMPSE OF THE PAST ago
CHAPTER 23: TIMING ago
UPDATE ago
CHAPTER 24: WHISPERS OF LOVE ago
CHAPTER 25: THE DRAGONS RETURN ago
CHAPTER 26: MASSACRE ago
CHAPTER 27: THE CORONATION ago
CHAPTER 28: THE BATTLE RAGES ON ago
CHAPTER 29: ALLEGIANCE ago
CHAPTER 30: LEVITIA DISK ago
CHAPTER 31: DEVELOPMENT ago
CHAPTER 32: VERN ago
CHAPTER 33: PLANS ago
CHAPTER 34: CONFLICTING EMOTIONS ago
CHAPTER 35: THE ORATION OF SILAS ago
CHAPTER 36: POWER CORRUPTS ago
CHAPTER 37: THE BLUE HAIR GIRL ago
CHAPTER 38: EASTERN DEVIL DISCIPLE ago
CHAPTER 39: BEFORE I MET HIM ago
CHAPTER 40: THE DAY I MET HIM ago
CHAPTER 41: LOVE CONQUERS ALL ago
CHAPTER 42: SUMMONS ago
CHAPTER 43: CROSSING PATH ago
CHAPTER 44: THE BALL ago
CHAPTER 45: THE BEGINNING OF THE END ago
CHAPTER 46: THE WAR COUNCIL ago
CHAPTER 47: A DREAM ago
CHAPTER 48: BATTLE OF BERTH ago
CHAPTER 49:LET A NEW WORLD BE BORNE ago
CHAPTER 50:HER SIDE ago
CHAPTER 51: HIS SIDE ago
CHAPTER 52: JOSEPHITE REBELLION ago
CHAPTER 53: THE SPEECH ago
CHAPTER 54: THE MEROVICH KING ago
CHAPTER 55: THE SPEAR ago
CHAPTER 56: MORTAL OR DIVINE? ago
CHAPTER 57: BATLLE OF THEA MOOR ago
CHAPTER 58: TEMPUS FUGIT ago
CHAPTER 59: A STEP FORWARD ago
CHAPTER 60: CHANCE ENCOUNTER ago
CHAPTER 61: BURDEN OR RESPONSIBILITY? ago
CHAPTER 62: TERRIBLE NEWS ago
CHAPTER 63: THE DECISIVE BATTLE ago
CHAPTER 64:CONCLUSION ago
CHAPTER 65: ANOTHER KINGDOM ago
CHAPTER 66: THE ARRIVAL ago
CHAPTER 67: NORTHERN BADGER ago
CHAPTER 68: HIS STORY II ago
CHAPTER 69: SO MANY THINGS ago
CHAPTER 70: SEPARATION AT ACRO ago
CHAPTER 71: MEMORIES AFTER MEMORIES ago
CHAPTER 72: THE BATTLE AT THE ROOFTOP ago
CHAPTER 73: THE MEETING BETWEEN THE PRINCE AND KING ago
CHAPTER 74: THE MARCH HAS BEGUN ago
CHAPTER 75: KISSES OF LOVE ago
CHAPTER 76: THE PROVOCATION ago
CHAPTER 77: HOLY LAND ENCOUNTER ago
CHAPTER 78: IN THE HOLY CITY ago
CHAPTER 79: HOPE ago
CHAPTER 80: AGREEMENT ago
CHAPTER 81: HARALD OATH ago
CHAPTER 82: THE THOUGHT THAT STARTED IT ALL ago
CHAPTER 83: STRIKE THE WATER ago
CHAPTER 84: ENCOUNTER AT THE TEMPLE ago
CHAPTER 85: THE RATS SHOWS THEMSELVES ago
CHAPTER 86: THERE BE DRAGONS ago
CHAPTER 87: RETURN FINALLY ago
CHAPTER 88: ABOLISHED ago
CHAPTER 89: THE MARRIAGE ANNOUNCEMENT ago
CHAPTER 90: THE MARRIAGE ago
CHAPTER 91: THE TREATY ago
CHAPTER 92: SIGNED AND SEALED ago
CHAPTER 93: HEAR, HEAR DRAGONS ago
CHAPTER 94: STAR OF THE CONQUEROR ago
CHAPTER 95: DRAGONS, DRAGONS ago
NEWS ago
CHAPTER 96: THUNDER AND FIRE ago
CHAPTER 97: TWO DRAGONS ago
CHAPTER 98: DRAGONS, OH DRAGONS ago
CHAPTER 99: DRAGON HEART ago
CHAPTER 100: DIPLOMATIC PLANS ago
CHAPTER 101: ORC HORDE ago
CHAPTER 102: BANTER ago
CHAPTER 103: WAR! ago
CHAPTER 104: NEAR THE END ago
CHAPTER 105: WAR OF THE ORCS CLANS ago
CHAPTER 106: CELEBRATION ago
CHAPTER 107: CHANGES ago
CHAPTER 108: TILL WE MEET AGAIN ago
CHAPTER 109: THE MATTER OF THE CROWN ago
CHAPTER 110: THE BEGINNING OF THE CONFLICT ago
CHAPTER 111: THE KING PEACE ago
CHAPTER 112: TRAINING IN THE IMAGINARY SCAPE ago
CHAPTER 113: COMPANION TO HEAVEN MOUNTAIN ago
CHAPTER 114: HEAVEN MOUNTAIN ago
CHAPTER 115: DECLARATION ago
CHAPTER 116: OPEN YOUR EYES ago
CHAPTER 117: THE ALL CONQUERING SECT ago
CHAPTER 118: THE WATERFALL PEAK ago
CHAPTER 119: THE BANQUET AT SUN MOON SECT ago
CHAPTER 120: DAILY OCCURRENCE ago
CHAPTER 121: MU XIYUN ago
CHAPTER 122: DISCIPLE ago
CHAPTER 123: CONFLICT IN THE WATERFALL PEAK ago
CHAPTER 124: THE FOUR IMMORTALS ago
CHAPTER 125: NEARING THE HEAVEN PEAK ago
CHAPTER 126: CHANGE OF ATTITUDE ago
CHAPTER 127: BUTTERFLY WINGS ago
CHAPTER 128: THE THREE ANIMALS ago
CHAPTER 129: THE WOLF ago
CHAPTER 130: THE BIRD ago
CHAPTER 131: OLD STORY ago
CHAPTER 132: THE THRONE THAT IS PROMISED ago
CHAPTER 133: THE BEGINNING OF THE CONFLICT ago
CHAPTER 134: THE DEVIL AND THE DRAGON ago
CHAPTER 135: THE UNEXPECTED DANGER ago
CHAPTER 136: CENTRAL CELESTIAL ago
CHAPTER 137: COMING HOME ago
CHAPTER 138: OF CHOICES ago
CHAPTER 139: THRONE OF VANGUA ago
CHAPTER 140: WAR ON MANY FRONTS ago
CHAPTER 141: SILENT WAR ago
CHAPTER 142: SUBTERFUGE ago
CHAPTER 143: SHEEPS ago
CHAPTER 144: SHEPHERD ago
CHAPTER 145: PROCLAMATION ago
CHAPTER 146: THE FIVE ELEMENTS ago
CHAPTER 147: WIN THE HEART ago
CHAPTER 148: THE WINTER COLD ago
CHAPTER 149: REGENCY ago
CHAPTER 150: THE LADY OF THE LAKE ago
CHAPTER 151: THE WHISPERING STAR ago
CHAPTER 152: SOUND THE HORNS! ago
CHAPTER 153: SOME JUSTICE ago
CHAPTER 154: MARCHING ago
CHAPTER 155: IT BEGAN ago
CHAPTER 156: NEGOTIATION ago
CHAPTER 157: GOOD DREAMS ago
CHAPTER 158: THE BATTLE OF ARLEANS ago
CHAPTER 159: RETREAT ago
CHAPTER 160: HEAVEN WILL ago
CHAPTER 161: LINCHPIN ago
CHAPTER 162: THE DOMINOES KEEP FALLING ago
CHAPTER 163: THE GREAT FAREWELL ago
CHAPTER 164: THE LEGEND BEGINS ago
NEW INFO ago
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zodzero
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i am out, no more netorare

At first i really love this story, but the netorare thing on this story make me don’t wanna read anymore.. 

Sledjer
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Great story and horrible grammar.

First, I would like to say that the story is indeed great.

In fact, the story is probably one of the best on this website. However, it presents a dilemma to people like me. On one hand, the story is good enough that I definitely want to read it from start to finish. It is marathon worthy. On the other hand, the grammar is so bad that it is almost physically painful to read. I truly, absolutely, hope that English is not your first language. I also hope that you have either not known English for over a year, or don't live in an English speaking country. That said, I hope my harsh criticism doesn't deter you from writing this, because, again, the story is incredible.

So, rather than  "don't read this because the grammar is bad" criticism, this is "please read the list of common mistakes you make that I am about to list; it will make your fanfiction so much better" criticism.

As I implied in the earlier sentence, here is the list of mistakes I hope you will educate yourself on to improve your writing:

  • Not adhering to gender-based pronouns ( It should be "he" or "his" for boys and "she" or "hers" for girls.)
  • Not using correct or consistent tense ( It is hard to explain this quickly, but please look up "correct tense usage for english".)
  • Not using consistent viewpoint ( If actions are described like "I walked around" for the main character, it should be described like that the next time the main character does something too, instead of "He walked around". There are three viewpoints in regards to pronouns, namely: "I" for first person, "you" for second person, and "he/she" for third person. Please use them consistently and correctly.)
  • Incorrect apostrophe usage for possession ( The apostrophe and "s" are supposed to be put after whatever is doing the possessing, not whatever is being possessed. For example, when describing the work of God, it should be worded "God's work", not "God work's".)
  • Incorrect plural usage ( Though it is quite simple, it is difficult to explain quickly because of all the rules. As such, I beg you to google "english plurals")
  • Typos ( A work having just a few typos is typically considered unimportant. However, the chapters of Age of Heroes have many typos. This begs me to ask the question: Do you proofread your work? Do you run it through a word processor? I understand that many people don't do this in favor of quicker releases, but it shouldn't really take too long, and it would greatly improve the quality of your work.)

I will probably continue to read this fanfiction even if you don't fix your grammar. However, I think it would truly be a waste. Currently, your inspired story is being inhibited by your sub-par grammar. I can easily foresee this fanfiction reaching top ten or even top five on this website if you were to fix the problems I listed.

Tekdg
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Great story but feel lost at time. EDITED

This FF has awesome story line and very interesting characters. The grammar is a bit bad but that doesn’t stop me from reading ? The only issue I have with the story is that I get lost after a while. The beginning was great since it centered around MC but after a while the story start to spread so much. Things are taking places at 4-5 different places at the same time. A lot of new characters pop up including both present and history of old heroes. I’ve gotten so lost that I just skim though chapters that doesn’t have anything to do w/ MC. In any case, it’s a very fun story which keep you hooked to it. Keep up the good work :)

 

EDIT:  Forget this… it’s still a great story but im dropping this. Either im not smart enough to keep up with all the information or this is way too confusing. Way too many POVs I’ve lost track of all the characters. At times, the MC doesn’t show up for 3-4 chapters. I feel like I’m studying instead of reading novel.

Levi19
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if you hate ntr, don't read this ff. The mc is spineless coward. Who does not mind if his bestmate have an affair with his wife. While she is pregnant with his child!!!! This ff has so much wasted potential. Because the writer forces all kinds of drama

Hurrahhh
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Was great and may be even better in the future, but I simply can't continue to read it.

Enjoyed the beginning seemed to have potention but I can't get past the crown's war... (It took me 2 days to read 4x chapters and 2 month to read another 15 while forcing myself).


Maybe it become better after it but I just can't enjoy it, it's not a story about heros at where I was reading it was going the way of betrayals and NTR not that I don't enjoy well made characters, it's just that we have only about 1/6 of the time about our MC as I would like to say it's not something that disappoint me usually but the pace's change feel off that's all.

Anyway thanks for the earlier fun reading and maybe later if I can get past the to my opinion shitty war.

random_bystander26
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NTR? so this story has NTR... oh great!!! im leaving this place... NTR isnt good for Heart :/

KnightOfXentar
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disappointing and wife is cheating bitch

story: Those who like this story are only kiddos who enjoy characters that are so overpowered that nobody can match them. In original timeline the MC was useless coward and yet in his 2nd chance he suddenly becomes GENIUS that develops super overpowered techniques and nobody can match him… so cheap.

 

characters:  all side characters feel like empty husks, they have no emotions, there are almost no dialogues. Even ”love interests” feel so empy.

Example: that elf who heard a prophecy that she will meet important person and thats only excuse she needs to jump him and seduce him to fuck her at every opportunity!! SERIOUSLY? 

 

Last straw: I find no excuse for his wife cheating. Worst part is that hero doesnt mind his wife cheating on him with his best friend (while she is pregnant). BULLSHIT! BULLSHIT!

 

also beware of terrible grammar! Its so bad, it will make your eyes bleed!

Vaevicti
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Amazing Story with many Flaws

First, I would like to start out by saying the story is excellent. A man gets a second chance to change the past to save his race. I am a sucker for this type of story which is why I will continue to read even with its many flaws.

 

But even with such a story, the writing itself has many flaws. The writing is basically a listing of these events and not much else. There is really no description of day to day events. There is no dialogue. Other characters, besides the MC, might as well be a tree or a rock because they are just a background that you never really “feel”. 

 

There is also many grammatical and spelling mistakes. That’s what you get with a non-native non-fluent speaker though.

 

Recommended for fans of the genre, but don’t expect much of the writing. 

rkieran2
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Story has potential, but grammar makes Age of Heroes unreadable

So to preface this review,  I stopped reading halfway through chapter 7.  While the story had me engaged, the grammar, style, and pacing made it impossible for me to continue.  In regards to style, the pacing for this story is extremely slow, mainly due to the many different points of view that are inserted into the story.  Readers do not need to see an event from four different peoples perspective; it just makes the story slow and confusing while exposing yourself to errors in continuity.  Trust me, the readers do not need to know what everyone thinks on a subject. 

The grammar for this story is really bad. Things that need to be plural are not (a character with two eyes cannot stare with one eye). The verb tenses are confusing as well; choose present or past tense and go with it.  Another issue is point of view.  There are 3 points of view: 1st person (I and we), 2nd person (you), and third person (he, she, and they).  In this story, the author switches from first person to third person and back again sometimes within the same paragraph.  As a good rule of thumb, if a story has multiple viewpoints, as this one has, it should be written in third person and when the viewpoint changes, there needs to be a clear separation between the two viewpoints.  If you want to write in first person, it is best to only write from that one perspective.

thaddpole
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Grammar and spell check learn it and master it.

I love your story I really do. I'm enjoying it so far however you have 2-3 major issues. The first one is absolutely  English grammar. I'm dyslexic so I already have a tough time understanding things as is grammar in English is more then a little hard for me.

The second issue is spacing. The problem is that you have no spacing between paragraphs which are really important in English literature.  The reasons behind this is that it separates topics and allows for structuring of the paper/story that you are telling.


The third and final thing is spelling. Now I don't know in what manner you are writing this story if you are using some sort of word processor or even using this websites submission form.  I believe that if you took about 20 minutes to do a quick proofread and spell check you could make your story 175% more approachable I guess that's the word. 

you have a solid story going on, but the lack of spacing, grammar, or spelling has made me question if you even try to look over it before you release it.