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A strong willed boy on the dawn of adulthood dies after stopping a horrible crime and is reborn in a new world full of magic and monsters. He isn't a naïve hero character, but he stays true to himself and upholds his morals, no matter the circumstances or cost. His new life is filled with failures and victories. Watch him as he looks for something he wants, and struggles against the world to obtain it.
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The Iron Dragon
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There’s more to be desired from your style, but you can’t magically become really good at something, I hope we’ll see improvement later on.

The story is enjoyable and easy to understand.

Your grammar doesn’t impair the flow of the reader (at least for a reader for whom english isn’t his native language ( like me )).

The character … meh he’s  too damn much to my liking :)

Don’t mind the haters and keep on writing!

Dolphin
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just wondering, did he get some bad influences because of his childhood?

Vaevicti
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Excellent start to what I hope will be a very enjoyable series. 

blazesbu
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Looking forward to more

 Great start! Really looking forward to the next chapter!

ianaiaponenko
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 i like this story, MC with hard time as  child , unexpected twist , i mean his confesion about reincarnation .

 

keep writing !)

drakninja
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So good! i wish there a cookie i can gave you

keep it coming, maybe add him a love interest or and epic weapon. if not then add him some more skill.

barakt
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Reading the prologue alone is enough to hook me and that’s before getting into the actual VR aspect of the story. The story is a must read and a thrilling highly detailed and descriptive narrative from the perspective of an 18 year old high school senior. 

mak
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awesome job with the story

this stroy is awesome.

thrilling and  also makes me eager to read new chapters.

good job.

hope to see new chapters soon.

Magus
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Magnificently awesome!

Nice characterization, and the storyline is very promising.

Especially like that he's improving himself, and others see him as an example to improve themselves.

This adventure is going at a very rapid pace, however to me that's no issue ;-)

Keep it up!

 

MangaManiac92
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im just guessing here but going to imagine his full beast form as something similar to the hounds in ghostbusters