Among the tear soaked flowers

by Pyscho of Ireland

Original Action Fantasy Romance Tragedy Reader interactive
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
a world unkwoun to him
a life ripped from him
a family yearned for
follow the story of a young man trying to regain part of his shattered life
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Kylar
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I do enjoy the story, just please accept a proofreader and go over your old chapters once more.

The poor grammar really brings the story down and I think skews the things you want to convey, but overall your plot has the potential to actually become interesting stuff. The characters are nothing new or innovative, but it's fine as far as ff goes.

CyBrutus
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I volunteer for Proofreader

 I like your Story! its great, it has comedy some serious scenarios and sensual/some sexuality in it which i like. The plot is good and it could go anywhere at this point.

 

Also i would like to Proof read your ff if possible, im not that OCD but Im in college right now so the practice helps as well.

AziroFF
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the story appears promising,the only thing that bothers me is the grammar,please try to find a proofreader

Azenzu
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i like the story so far, but you really need a proofreader. other than that it is good :D

valene86
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nice story but u should do or get a good PR