Fantasial Apocalypse
by Perdere666
- Sexual Content
Comet Storms, Invaders from Space, Zombie Apocalypse, Pandemics, or the Armageddon— Throughout history, humans have imagined all sorts of ways as to how [ The world would end ].
Global warming and dealing with disasters, such as plagues, earthquakes, wars, floods, invasions, murders, droughts, and battles. Some says that all of these could end the world.
Even the 16th century prophet Michel de Nostradame, the very famous Nostradamus, seemed to know how the end of the world was going to come to pass and prophesized.
But reality was proven different.
The world didn’t end with those simple propositions.
In fact, it was completely different. It could even be said to be magical, straight out of fantasy stories.
Yeah. That’s right! Monsters and Beasts, Gods and Demons all of them appeared one after another and caused the world to end.
… And this event marks the beginning of a new era. An era of monsters and demon roaming around the world.
However, these invaders hated humanity and so they tried to extinguish them. Leading Humanity to fight for their survival!
Allen Bando, the world’s most wanted criminal; [ The Black Demon King ] joined the [ Dawn Alliance ] to fight but failed in the end.
Now that he was given a second chance, what calamity would he brought in his return… ?
Allen: I have seen my land change with my own eyes and watched the masses brought to their knees.
Even though I died, I have not regretted what I have done, but what I have not done.
The world change and my comrades betrayed me but in this second life, I will not lose.
World, bring it on!
You want to see me fail but not today motherf*cker! This world has every odd against me but I will stand my ground because this world should remain mine forever.
Many are torn apart but I am a Man!
I will stand with my heart on my sleeve.
I will kneel nor bow to no one!!
World, for the second time around, here I come!!
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Hello guys, I tried changing the sypnosis as one of the reader's wanted. But I don't have any talent in writing one so, I hope this time would be good.
For your information, English is not my native tongue and I admit that I have very bad grades in my english class, so if there's any error in my grammar then I apologize...
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Meh
Good story. Awkward to red due to grammatical errors. MC has like three different personalities. Fights are pretty good. Every soscial interraction is way too overdone. It feels like the author dosnt believe people reading it hadde never interracted with other people.
Time progression feels pretty good, with the skipping of parts that you dont rally need to read. For instance fights with trash mobs.
Id think the MC would actually be mature due to living a life of war. I end up feeling he is just like a whimsical child most times. It makes it hard to both read and get invested in the story.
Promising??
current as of chapter 90
********SPOILERS!!!!!!****MAYBE****MOST LIKELY**********SPOILERS!!!!!!****
So, let's get this review out of the way. Story started out a bit cliche. But that's just me. I read a lot.
Style: You started out great. The whole apocalypse thing is neat. Other than that, kinda lacking. It just seems so..........ordinary. More in story.
Story: Here we go. Mc gets betrayed by his friends. I've seen that before. A lot. What I haven't seen tho, is that they have no reason for it. I'm on chapter 90 and it has not been shown why they betrayed him. Just did it I guess cause they got bored??? Your story started out as a great LN, but at like chapter 15 or something, slowly started to drift to a typical Chinese wuxia format. What I mean is--- Mc is not OP from start. He fights a few lvl 1 enemies, struggles but gets it done. Mc gains some power. Here comes a lvl 3 enemy. Mc beats it with difficulties. Cool but, from this point on, there are no more lvl 1 enemies. It's all lvl 3 and up. He fights a lvl 5,no more lvl 3s show up. So on and so on. Also following the Chinese wuxia guidelines, the women. Oh my god, they grow on trees. They are popping out everywhere. And they all love Allen. Why?? Cause he strong!! It's never explained why he keeps his super rare skill equip either. Just does. That and, everyone has equip. Like everyone. How is it rare, if everyone has it??
Grammar: Meh, I've seen worse. But it's still kinda bad. Gets worse as your story progresses. Wrong tense, past and present get messed up a lot. Other than that, great going bro.
Character: The bane of your existence. Took you around 40 chapters to notice the people complaining about lack of description, after which you kept it minimal. Oh well. One last thing. Mia. How does she work?? Her father is an Italian mafia dude. Cool. Her mother is a Japanese chick. Cool. Both countries have a majority that have brown hair and brown eyes. How do you get blond hair blue eyed girl from that mix??? That has been bugging me for the longest time. Did they mother sleep around with someone else?? Or did the father?? Please explain. Especially since every time Mia shows up, you first describe her with blond hair blue eyes.
So yeh, long review. Story is kinda starting to drop in quality. Also, your foreshadowing is horrid. At this point, I am convinced that Allen is the demon king. Great story tho, keep up the great work.
P.S. who names their philipino kid Allen???
****Chapter 101 Update Review*****
Welp, it's gone. The story has died. Started out great, but over time, has become a chore to read. From too many exclamation marks ( every other sentence, really) to chapters about people talking ( 4 back to back about 2 chicks talking about Allen. Dear god). You have slowed down your story too much. Should have focused on quality instead of quantity in this case.
It has been a good story ( first 40 chapters at least) but it's time I dropped it. Don't let this review discourage you and keep on trucking ahead at your own pace, because at the end of the day, this is still your story. Good luck.
Amateur hour at it's finest
Reviewed at: Chapter 194: [ Allen and Mia’s Reunion ]
I tried to like this story but, I just could not find myself liking any of the characters whatsoever.
There is no consistancy with their behavior. One second the MC is cold hearted and doesn't care about anyone and the next he is helping others and warning them about the apocolypse.
His first so called Love interest is a Piece of shit (POS) IMO and deserves to be killed.
I can understand being hardened because you lived through the former apocolypse but, she has no redeeming qualities that make her worth caring about.
In the first few chapters she shoots a student in the shoulder just because he was scared and not understanding what was going on when suddently monsters appeared at their school. When he speaks up after getting shot asking if she knew who is family was she just kills him by shooting him in the head.
Just because he was scared and questioning what the hell is going on she kills him? Seriously that was some classic shitty writing right there! It was not like he was attacking anyone or was threatning her or the MC. She just arbitrarily decided to kill him and the MC just shakes his head and lets it go like it never happened. But, this is the MC who care so much about Humanity lol
There is a big differance between making a character edgy and decisive and making a character a sociopath who has zero redeeming qualities. This would not be a big issue if it was not obvious that the author is trying to setup Mia as this tough baddass love interest but, honestly I would not mind seeing her killed early after her shitty attitude and behavior.
Go back to the drawing board and make some consistant characters. While your at it hire an editor!
Promising
Reviewed at: Chapter 24: [ Graveyard ]
This story seems like it might be promising, but the grammar is worse than most stories I've seen on this site. Hopefully it gets better soon...?! Progression is also very unclear and as a result, it feels very much like a "slice of life" novel. Like I said, promising but problematic.
Extremely Disappointing
It was originally pretty good, but
Good story
This is a good story so far with good mc and not a complete hypocrite jackass who kills everyone who pisses him off the mc has a unique personality and some cringe worthy moments but in all it is a good novel
Not the best out there, but still a good read.
Even with the kinda poor style i still find that this story is a real gem. Although it can be kinda hard to read at times,hence the middling grammer, I find the story entertaining and the chars are reletively 'real'. All in all, enough reason to say that this story is one people should at least give a try.
Now my most favorite story
I always liked this novel but now this is my most favorite novel. the only thing that bothers me is waiting for chapters. I can not wait to see the what happens with that bitch that betrayed him in the beginng of the story
Bad grammar af
Barely readable.
One word
Spoiler allert the word is cliche. If you have read alot of ln's this is most probably not for you, as for why that's because 90% of the time you will understand what is going to happen, as long as you follow the basic Chinese wuxia novel format(with a slice of ln reading experience).