The Errors I Made.

by JadeFire

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Female Lead Magic Martial Arts Reincarnation Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

At 14 years old, death found Rize hanging by her neck. Rize finds herself reborn fifty years later, the Gods giving her another shot at life. With mere whispers of her memories remaining, follow Rize as she forges a new path in life. Events will follow that will shake the earth and heavens to their core.

The rewrite is going really well I hope you all enjoy it.

 

Cover Art isn't mine I couldn't find the original person so I decides to use it as it was perfect representation of Rize literally could not get any closer.

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The Errors I Made version 2 ~ Chapter 1 ago
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aldrinkhan
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The story and chars are good. The mystery and the way it unveals is quite sophisticated.

But gotta give that minus one star for the grammar and typo errors. Normally i would comment when i see one or two in a chapter. But more than that is a chore. The mistakes on grammar aren't actually super bad but it removes the immersion the reader has on the story.

Myriad
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I have read a bit over half of the 30 chapters so far and I must say I'm looking forward to know what's happening next in this story. 

My main issue come with the grammar, there's a ton of small mistakes that distract the reader from time to time. Maybe the author first language isn't English, but so is mine and I still find this distracting. Would rate this higher if it wasn't for those.

Nonetheless, I'd still recommend this story as of right now!

Krimety
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This is a great story, and I really look forward to seeing where it goes.  I'm currently caught up to chapter 43.

The characters are fun, and the mystery surrounding the different groups is enough to keep you guessing. 

There are very few gramatical errors, and there are also some aspects of the story where I'm really trying to wrap my head around what is going on. (Mainly these are the parts that are shrowded in mystery, and we aren't told that much just yet. )

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Overall, this is a great story, and I recommend diving right in.

 

norwegian man
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she doesn't become sucessfull overnight and i like the characters and plot. the mystery is fun too

TowerOfStone
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Overall. I give this a 5.0 for potential even though as of now it isn't that high. This is incredibly different story. As of the most recent rewrite so far it is good.

Style is solid. Not groundbreaking, but solid enough that you won't get bored reading it. Good enough that you want to continue reading.

Story is where this shines. The mystery and interweb of all the characters is exciting to see how it plays out.

Grammar is where this struggles. Decent enough to get job done, but some parts break immersion. The new verison seems better.

Character is where this shines again. Solid character building they all have backstories and make you wanna know more. Characters are more than just (bad guys caise muhh).