Diary of Erica Kron
by spine
~~Note~~
I've merged several of the earlier entries together to be more accommodating to new readers. If you tried reading before but couldn't get past the whole "I have to click next a hundred times" thing then it should be much better now.
Hi. My name is Erica. I'm a sprite, and though I might be a little young I'm living on my own for the first time. I can't wait to meet new people and to learn more about the world I call my home.
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Great story.
Fantastic.
Absolutely love this story. It's derivative of Re:Mon, however it's fantasy, not LitRpg.
Great characters, great world, fun plot and interesting time lapsing. Overall I'm finding this story to be absolutely fun and an entertaining way to spend 8 hours.
Give it a try
Reviewed at: Update and a new story.
The story gets better as it progresses, there are few chapters which are short and can be skipped without taking any toll on the story but that's what you get if story is updated daily.
Review atleast needs 50 words so here they are
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Yes you can... Well, I CAN, but not you?
Those "" and "" in chapter 77 and 94 are annoying.
At first I wanted to write a review back around chapter 30, but I stopped and caught up to 137 before writting. I'm agreeing with the second reviewer, I can feel the love. The first reviewer says you don't make bi-daily updates... I've checked your progress over the last 2 months since that review as well as a month before, the person is crying over spilled milk... You are going great in the routine of regular updates. Thanks... Time for the actual review...
I believe the work of the diary you have right now is fine... The sprite that's writting in the diary isn't a scholar. Having mistakes isn't going to make me look down on you, but I've noticed as these entries got longer and more energetic, the mistakes have lessened, which can be a representation of our MC's writting in her diary... If a day comes in the future where the entries become chaotic, the character better be drunk or have a broken hand, lulz...
When I thought about each catagory, I fight with my self internally trying to decide what score I would give you, but ultimately because your story is in the form of a diary, I can't reduce any points from grammar... I can't complain for character development, because this is in the perspective of our silly MC... I really, really, really want to reduce something... I know, that style score, it's 100% of my opinion, so I'm going to give you a 4.5 because f**k you.
Keep up the good work, I think the style is fine, but I think our MC would obviously like longer chapters, given how she writes an entry almost daily, but always keeps it short? It's like she wants to write, but just doesn't know what to say. I like all the corny thoughts she writes down, like uhh.. so that's it and uhh... good night diary? Like she isn't 100% sure she wrote enough... In reality, I'm fine with everything you got going, I'm rooting for you.
Thanks for writting... I wanted to write more, but I am sure you had enough (LOL?)
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Reviewed at: Update and a new story.
I really really enjoyed this story and I'm also really sad that it ended now I am hoping for a book two or some Soch for those on the fence about reading this I would like to tell you to give it a go it's fun and unlike any other story I've seen