A fat boy is trying hard to have a colourful life in high school.
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After reading the whole volume 1, I think that the author improved himself from his first chapter to the end of the volume. I just hope that authorities don't make him rewrite everything because the work closely resembles 'Masamune-kun's Revenge'.
The story is very close to reality and the mc is smart. He uses his head to think about the situation he is in. Many things happen in the story because of a given reason not because of the mc's luck. Though the case of 'be my boyfriend' is an exception to all this and I hope that the author can make a reasonable explanation about it.
Another problem I found that chapter starts with new settings. I meant to say that the previous chapter end abruptly and the next one fails to convince(me) the reader that it was logical.
In chapter 12: the 'victim-senpai' asks him to become her boyfriend but in the next chapter it is (I think) indicated that she vanished and left there standing with his mouth open and so his on his bed now. That sounds unreal because he should at least talk to her and ask for a reason. There should be a dialogue between them about this.
(This problem is taken care of in the newest chapter though)
The story is good but character lack depth to them except the Mc. This is not surprising though because they are not given sufficient time in the novel for readers(me) to actually understand them.
Well, that was all so 3 and a half stars and I might also edit it if the author improves.