Re:Immortal

by Hakase

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Psychological Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content
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Montinje
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The god of madness and pain grants imortality, what could go wrong?

I would love more chapters.

This story displays the main character perfectly as he goes through the emotional roler coster that is life. I found myself able to share the main characters confusion and sence of betrayal. being unable to die can suck. It is also refreshing to see an overpowered ability that is certainly not comfortable or overly overpowered. deffinately potential to be in my top 10 stories if this is kept up(10 chapters at review time).

monoliith
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The premise is there but

The style hes going for is great, the execution isn't.

As of ch. 12, the only character with any building is the MC, and all he has is "potentially unhinged crybaby". Not a great starting point.

The story is literally nonexistant.

Grammar is meh

Style is great though! The whole "falling into madness" thing. Chapters are to short to make it more than skimworthy though, since 80% of the fall is just repeating the same shit over and over and over and over and over and over

Kohrim
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I am really interested where this is going 

siebenSamurai
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Even though I gotta say that this story is totally different than your others (or at least those I've read), I really like it! Please keep up the good work!

Is this 200 characters long? No? Well how about now?