god Dimension

by rhino

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Harem Magic Martial Arts Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

 

 I fan of Terror Infinity and I was so up stepped that all the story about it stop,
So i give it opportunity powers of x men toriko one piece naruto and more

 Warning: Major spoiler for the Manga, Anime, Light Novels, 

 Full disclosure. Several elements inspired by stories such as terror infinity, any related fanfic stuff cough side b and domain

 My first story it take time but i believe in the story.


so the main Character is lee ,He is 18 years old who lives in Miami , takes a height of 5'7 feet.
The story take place half year after his little sister disappeared before his eyes that she was on the computer.
lee Just come home He looks into his sister's room and thinks where Naomi is and feel deep in his heart that she is somewhere, He went into her room and sat in her chair who knows how many and suddenly the computer turned on

Hello lee I'll give you a chance to know where Your little sister just type Yes.
 
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Shinnn
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Good mc. Interesting story. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Shadow8ting
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It is ok. Adds too much stuff too soon. It also fails to add some nessesary information that it then adds later on. The grammar leaves much to be desired but it is understandable. Overall if the flow of the story and the gramar was gixed this would be an amazing story.