Age of Change

by ageofchange

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Strong Lead
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Generic world-turned apocalypse-rpg. pse-rpg story.

Sparse world building. Descriptions of enviroment / surroundings are non-existent, fragmented.

Numerous typographical errors in nearly every paragraph. Obviously dictated by speech to text. 

Characters are wet cardboard, Mc is a generic emotionally repressed, meek/socially inept collage student who apparently is also a rageing psychopath. Mental.

Similar story formatting, tone, writing quality as many of the trash "psychotic loser becomes op hero / anti hero" fictions flooding into royalrl from Asia in the past few years. 

Tried to give it a chance but couldn't force myself to finish chapter 14 of the 16 currently released. 

As this fiction stands, I would not recommend reading it. 

 

Ageofchange, please proof your work before posting! I would recommend having someone READ your story back to you so that you can hear exactly how it flows and catch your own errors. If you don't like how your story reads or don't understand what is happening, chances are, other people probably won't either.  Good luck.