Beyond The Abyss (Rewrite)

by ArcheMage

Fan Fiction HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Psychological LitRPG Magic Male Lead Strategy
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Traumatising content

I would often ask myself. What if the real world suddenly became a game? It was a preposterous question, perhaps even foolish, there was no questioning it. Life isn't a game and it will never be. Yet, it seems that today marks the day where i defied the impossible, as from today. My life became a game. I'm Han Jee-Han, and this is my story...

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Word Wielder (II)
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I Am Taking Off (II)
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Wyatt_Currie
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Awesome content, love the new things you are doing with the pre-existing world of The Gamer. There was so much more that could have been done in the original storyline that wasn’t, I hope you elaborate on everything that can be done with such a sick concept! Keep it up!

Sudra
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I was hopeful when I saw another fanfiction of the gamer, but I can't read through the run on sentences. Just skim through the first chapter and you'll see what I mean. 

Just out of curiosity, I pulged it into the hemmingway editor.  After taking out the status screens, It scored a fourteen.