The Power Within

by Lukeman88

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Magic Supernatural

This story follows Arthur and Tom as they enter a world they never before saw as a possibility. Both have survived as wanderers by choice, but now have a possiblity at a new lifestyle with the only requirement being that they give it their all. Their destination is uncertain, but the journey along the way is what truly matters.

I wrote this a few summers back and am aware it is poorly edited. For me at least, the story itself is what matters. Any advice or criticism on characters, interactions and early plot development would be beneficial. I hope to go back and polish this story, but want to know if anyone sees any major cracks before I start fixing the small stuff. This is a trial run and I have more to post if this goes well. I hope someone enjoys reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

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