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Drew watched the two newcomers out of the corner of his eye. Ever since they’d realized he was holding back on how many xatherite he had, they’d been having a whispered conversation with each other. The group had spread out. Drew, Sarah, and Katie had taken the front, the three coasties only a few feet apart. Jholie and Bill followed a dozen paces behind them, while Robbi and JP were another dozen feet behind the second row.

“What’s wrong?” Katie asked quietly, having picked up on Drew’s soured mode.

“I’m not sure. Something with JP and Robbi.” Drew answered, his voice cast low enough that Sarah, who was on the other side of Katie, had a hard time hearing him.

“You think they’re mana twisted or something?” Sarah asked.

Drew considered this for a moment. There didn’t seem to be any logical reason why a human couldn’t become mana twisted. The Wereghouls were evidence that there wasn’t something special about their bodies that made humans immune to the ravages of the sudden increase in ambient mana. But it didn’t quite fit with what he’d heard in the tutorial. Would the human protectorate have created a system that would allow that?

Katie nudged him in the side and he looked up, realizing that he’d gotten lost in thought. “I don’t think so. Everything else we’ve seen that’s mana twisted physically changed.” They were just about to pass the field where they had seen the bashers and Drew frowned while looking around; all the rabbit-like creatures had disappeared. “You guys feel that?” He asked, turning towards Jholie and Bill.

It was Robbi that answered, “It’s a mana storm, we need to move.” The fear in JP’s voice as he answered Drew was evident. JP and Robbi started running to catch up to the rest of the group. They were still a couple hundred feet from the auto shop where they’d left Daryl and the others.

Drew looked out and realized that he could see the storm with mana sight; it looked like a massive ley line floating in the sky miles away. As he watched, he could see it moving closer to their position, and shaking his head, Drew grabbed Katie’s hand and began running the towards their safe haven. “We’ve got to move.” Drew said over his shoulder, but everyone was already running.

Bill was keeping pace with Jholie, and Drew could hear his encouraging shouts. The three coasties in their combat boots moved somewhat slower than JP and Robbi, but as the two of them had no idea where to go, they trailed along behind Drew, who was leading everyone as the fastest person who had actually been there before. When they rounded the last corner towards the auto shop, Drew’s heart sank. Six trolls were walking around the building with a large creature that had a snake head and a furry quadruped body, with bands of bright blue fur running in diagonal stripes across its otherwise off-white fur. The creature was sniffing the ground like it was tracking something.

Drew dropped Katie’s hand and began forming the hand seals to cast frostfire storm; hoping to catch the trolls together before they noticed them. He heard Sarah mutter her buff spells, but his focus was on the surviving trolls and the spell he was trying to cast. JP pushed a magazine into his HK45 and the click as it locked into place caused all seven of their opponents to look their direction.

Making a mental note that their hearing was excellent, Drew finished casting frostfire storm, catching the creature and four of the trolls in its radius. The other two trolls had been lucky in that their bodies were oriented towards them. They’d pushed off the ground, leaping towards the group. Drew pointed a finger at one of them, but before he could activate fireball a shot rang out. Red traces of energy trailed behind the bullet, and two rounds impacted one troll in the chest. Fire erupted out of the impact points, consuming the affected troll and burning it to ash in half a second. Drew switched targets, launching a fireball at the last one still alive, burning it alive as well.

The group continued to run, the multihued clouds of the manastorm now visible on the horizon. They had to skirt around the frostfire storm that was still raging, but they were inside past the illusion before the first drops of rain hit.

Daryl must have told those inside that the trolls were sniffing around, because they were met with a variety of homemade spears and firebombs. “It’s okay, its just us and some friends!” Drew shouted loudly, afraid one of the scared individuals would make the same mistake he made back at the exchange. The former prisoners began lowering their weapons and JP holstered his gun.

Daryl’s voice appeared in Drew’s head as Jholie and Bill began hugging their compatriots. “I’m posted up in a building across the way; I’ll keep a watch until dark, but I don’t think anything will be attacking us during the storm.” Drew held his hand up and waved to Daryl in response, since there was no way for him to answer back.

“Alright everyone, a mana storm is hitting, so we’re safe for the next few hours. Anyone who wants to can come see me and I’ll cast refreshing rain on them. But we’re going to be planning the rescue as soon as we can.” It took a few minutes to sort everything out. Most everyone opted to stay awake to contribute to the plans, though a few, like Jholie, decided they would rather sleep.

As they were discussing sleep Katie asked him, “When was the last time you actually slept, Drew? Not just passing out from slotting xatherite, but really slept?”

“Before the Advent.” He said without thinking, and it was loud enough that JP and Robbi heard him. Drew winced internally as they looked at him then each other again. Another piece of information they didn’t need to have.

“I think you should sleep too. It can’t be healthy for your brain to be going that fast for that long. Besides with Daryl not here, all the really important planning is going to go on tomorrow morning anyway.” Katie said, and Sarah nodded in agreement.

Drew attempted to protest, but the two women refused to bend, and 30 minutes later he’d taken his boots off and was attempting to sleep on the only couch in the building. It had been somewhat embarrassing how much everyone was willing to accommodate him. He’d saved everyone in the building except for JP and Robbi, and they were all willing to make some sacrifices so that he could get a decent night's sleep.

Before Advent he had always had some trouble sleeping, but almost as soon as his eyes closed, he felt like his body had been waiting for this sleep for more than a week.

* * *

Drew smiled. He was warm and comfortable, and they were letting him sleep longer than he anticipated, his body waking up naturally. The soft silk sheets of the bed made almost no sound as he shifted.

Wait, silk sheets? He could feel them around him, and he cracked his eyes open. The view that greeted him was not the one he had fallen asleep to. He sat up to get a better view of the scene. Before him, a massive red and yellow nebula stretched out as far to either edge of the viewport as it would allow before being blocked by massive metallic wings. He was in a luxuriously appointed bedroom, glowing polished wood panels and plush carpeting made the room seem more organic, but the viewport and his experience playing space simulators told him that he was on a spaceship or space station.

Was he still asleep? Could this be some sort of dream? He pinched himself, but didn’t wake up.

Standing up he realized that the ‘form’ he was currently in was made of some sort of slightly transparent looking plastic that was visibling shifting to his normal skin tone. A body, but not his own. It was a strange realization, reminding him of the replicants in Blade Runner. But before he could delve too far down this particular philosophical rabbit hole, a chime sounded behind him and he turned towards the wall, where a drawer slid out, revealing a pair of shoes, socks, and a one piece jumpsuit with the symbol of a shield and spear crossed on the chest. On the shoulder, a rank insignia of an inverted diagonal line was visible.

Not liking the feeling of being naked, despite the fact that this form had no distinguishable private parts, he began putting the clothes on. As soon as he’d finished putting on his shoes another chime sounded. He turned again to look as a young looking human appeared from the other side of a door that had opened without a noise.

“Greetings midshipman, I’m Themis. I’m here to escort you to the Admiral.” He was holding a small blue glass pane in front of him that looked very much like a data pad would in Star Trek. “If I may say so sir, you’ve caused quite a stir here. No one expected it to take you this long to arrive.”

Drew frowned at the man. The name Themis was familiar to him--one of the minor Greek Gods. But he couldn’t for the life of him remember what his portfolio had been. Horses and rivers maybe? Did that make him the god of travellers? As soon as he came near, the man turned and began leading him deeper into the spaceship. He had decided it was a spaceship instead of a station due to the lack of small craft when he was looking out the viewplate.

“Themis, where am I?” Drew asked as he rushed to keep up with the secretary? Steward? Drew realized he wasn’t entirely sure what the man’s job on the ship actually entailed.

“Oh, sorry Midshipman, you’re on Olympus, the flagship of the Orion-Cygnan Fleet. We’re currently near what Earth astronomers call the Ring Nebula. Although we’re getting ready to deploy against the ninth Elatrin fleet, which will take us closer to the Deneb system. The admiral wanted to talk to you before we were out of range.” Themis replied quite unhelpfully. “Normally this meeting wouldn’t occur for another decade or so, while we waited for you to grow into your powers and be ready to take the Oaths, but the Admiral insisted.”

Drew stopped and stared at Themis’ quickly retreating form. “What the hell is going on?”

Themis, hearing the distance between them increasing, turned around and tapped on the datapad he held before looking up at Drew. “You were notified that you had been granted membership into the Order of the Dragon, correct?”

Drew nodded his head, confused.

“As the local Order representative in this region of the Milky Way Galaxy, Admiral Ares has opted to take you on as a page until such a time as you are eligible for your training as a squire. Due to the unexpected nature of your emergence on a newly Advent’ed dimensional slice, you have created a rather unusual set of circumstances. But the rules of the Order are clear and the Admiral has determined to assist you in your training, as is befitting an Order prospect of your potential. However, as I said earlier, we are currently readying the fleet for action against an invading Elatrin fleet. The system prevents the Admiral from doing more to assist you until you have reached the rank of Lieutenant-Commander. What little he can do will occur during your meeting with him.”

“Does that answer your question, Midshipman Michalik?” Themis said with a smile, and Drew had a flashback to the first day of Advent talking to Aevis during the tutorial.

“Not particularly, but I imagine that is as much as I’m likely to get.” Drew said, and Themis nodded his head to confirm his guess.

“Very well, then please follow me, the Admiral is quite busy.”

Drew followed along as the man entered an elevator, and as soon as Drew had entered as well, the lift began moving. Drew could only tell because the auras around him shifted rapidly; there was no sense of motion from the machine itself. They stood in uncomfortable silence for some time, which Drew used to take the time to examine Themis’ aura, which was almost completely green. He hadn’t seen anyone that was so predominantly one color among any of the earth-3 inhabitants he’d seen.

Themis frowned as he watched Drew look at him, “You are an interesting specimen, Midshipman Michalik. It’s clear you already have some awareness of the mana spectrum, and some way to refrain from answering a sleep sync for several days. I’m beginning to understand why Admiral Ares was so insistent on you receiving your introduction before we left the range of the sleep sync.”

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castle954 @castle954 ago

Thanks for the chapter!

Finally get to see some more of the Protectorate side of things.


Sunsetdreamer52 @Sunsetdreamer52 ago

Thanks for the chapter! This looks interesting...

Flammenwerfer @Flammenwerfer ago

Huh, so sleeping actually lets him get into contact with things.

That means he should either sleep as much or as little as possible

    Inbetweenaction @Inbetweenaction ago

    or just enougn. he can't really be bothering his superiors all the time, even with the order of the dragon membership he has. nor should he start mucking about in his senior (in experience) subordinates of the protectorate. he should balance the amount of sleep he gets so he can keep in contact with the protectorate, while still not so much as to leave himself weakened at earth. and the time he gets on earth when others sleep are one of the main reasons (appart from his dps) that he is growing into a player in the local political climate, whether as a leader in his own right or as a kingmaker.


magpie @magpie ago

People actually cooperating -- how novel! It is rather nice to read a story that doesn't follow the (much abused) trope:

"Authority is out to get you! Everybody in power is Evil/Stupid/Racist/etc.( check all that apply)!" 

Now hopefully 'The Admiral' will give a reason why the Navy are acting like assholes so far.      ...and thanks for the chapter.

    Inbetweenaction @Inbetweenaction ago

    they sort of hasn't been? i mean, from a certain perspective, at the time that a world was capable of becoming a full member, they instantly gave the powers that the people was due, and even set up a system for passing on the relavant knowlage trough selecting spokse persons that receved the tutorial. and this is while fighting a desperate war for survival/freedom (or the "humankind will survive/prevail" doesn't make sence).

    sure, it was a rocky tranformation, and maybe could have been done more smothly, but they are at war, and there are/where a hell of alot of humans to get the information to.

    then again, from another perspektive, they told a few random guys about what was about to go on, droped a few guns from a pasing plane and opened the doors for monsters before anyone could even figure out what the holow pipes with a pice of wood was for. even a few hours delay for people to prepare would have been a gamechanger when it comes to how many humans would survive the transformation.

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    dm xanadu @dm xanadu ago

    Not everyone is going to cooperate. But I think the vast majority of survivors are willing to help others if it means they are more likely to survive.

chazzi @chazzi ago

Thank you for the Chapter :)

Wow i guess that answered my earlier question. Completely different from what I expected the first contact meeting to be like.

BloodedBroadAxe @BloodedBroadAxe ago

This looks suspiciously like he’s about to meet this SUPER op person that will teach him how to be SUPER op and no one else :/ really hope it isn’t just another one of those stories :/

    wolf.shinigami @wolf.shinigami ago

    You are acting like no one in life is awarded opportunities that allow them to stand miles ahead of their peers lol. Instead of hoping it isn't one of those stories, why don't you instead hope there is a valid reasoning for why he was awarded his various "leg ups" aka all those red slots etc

      BloodedBroadAxe @BloodedBroadAxe ago

      i couldn't care less, ofc there are people in real life born to far more or people who get far more lucky, but there is 20 thousands stories of people that get stuff handed to them all the time on royal road, and i want to read something that isn't just another power trip gratification story

      wolf.shinigami @wolf.shinigami ago

      I understand what you are sayiing, but I do not think that logic applies to this situation. His abilities are pretty situational thus far, he has cleard advantages and disadvantages. All I am saying is that the effort he has put in hasn't made this exactly a wish fulfillment story. Especially because I think he will more than likely receive guidance more than anything.

      Theatre @Theatre ago

      I agree with wolf here, granted there is some power up and Drew is ahead of others, this story still strides away from wish fulfilment fantasies. The characters have a soft foundation for character growth and depth, for all characters really and we can see each for their own personalities and plans, instead of blind following and leadership. For example Bill still remains the leader, contesting with Drew at times which makes sense given his rank and time with his own people, Drew isn’t there just to take charge and do what he wants, and we can already see that his mapping is very offensive, leaving little in ways of supportive measures like Katie. From the start, there has been struggle and strife to help grow our character instead of simply waltzing through carnage like nothing applies to him, and we have seen some characters that had potential to be important, die. I hope the author keeps this up, as it builds tension in a apocalyptic time for earth. Granted, it is not the best written novel but it’s good to recognise improvements, and I believe that Drew being introduced to another party involving the fate of earth is a good thing, and we can be sure that he may not be the first, or last to have done so. Another may have been granted a rank opposite of Drew’s order, and could lead to a future antagonist. I look forward to see what could be done with the story, and curious to see if the author wishes to make the running town a evil lair, or just a cautious one. I think most people on royal road have read so many troupes that simply lead to the big bad cliche that introduces a typical, one dimensional human villain, but I think we can be surprised, given the depth and caution shown by some of the characters so far, who all have room to develop from being simple background props.

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      dm xanadu @dm xanadu ago

      This is all mostly correct, although it will become obvious in the near future Sarah is actually now the ranking officer from the pre-advent military. Although she probably won't remain there for long if they manage to rescue many officers from the DIA building. I don't intend for Drew to be super OP compared to everyone else, sure he has his strengths but he also has some very obvious weak points. That isn't going to change during the planned portion of the book(s). I haven't mapped out what happens after the third act of Drew's story, and there is potential for him to become more over powering at that point.