Gardener of Immortality

by AnonFag

Original HIATUS Action Adventure LitRPG Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

All beg for his herbs. All praise his pills

Even the celestial emperor is courteous before him as he is the gardener of immortality

He was the Alchemy Emperor In the past life and now will conquer the universe I’m this one.

 

updates probably 1-3 times a week. Not devoted yet

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Daddy05
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Style should be improved.

Grammar is not that good, It needs improving. And you should correct your mistakes from previous chapters.

The idea of the novel is quite interesting but not executed that well.

Character development is not good at all and needs improvement as fast as possible. 

 

Plus another idiotic thing is the patreon and paying money for only 1 chapter a month.

This novel only has 3 chapters (including Prologue). 

So $5 for 1 chapter a month. That is the biggest scam as the novel isn't even professional. Because many people from Royalroad post their books for a little over $5 and they are completed good books that were popular. 

Other than that I wish you the best of luck. 

(Not recommended until further improvements)