God of the Apocalyptic World

by Xiator

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Strong Lead Supernatural

A cursed boy with the power to assimilate souls is found in a wrecked laboratory. 

 

 

 

 

 

Cover image is not mine. If you are the owner and want it taken down. Please let me know.

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Yiyun345
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Hidden Gem, Few chapters however

This review will be moderately short.

The story has a lot of potential. I was surprised not to see it on the trending list, but not shocked either. Not all trending stories deserve a read, and a lot of them are in fact bad...

I don't know if you don't have the time or if you're just bored with writing. Whatever the issue I hope you can continue this entertaining novel very soon.

It's still early to try and judge the characters but the story and the grammar have been more than decent so far.

The writing style is exactly my type so I couldn't be too objective. I like plot driven stories, and there aren't a lot on RR. Most of them are a grammatically sound and more, but they're either too common, or take themselves too seriously. Trying to be original for the sake of being creative does not make a story good.

That's my personal opinion, but you got something unique here. If I just had to make one reproach it would be the emphasis on the mc.Your novel could benefit from you sharing the spotlight between protagonists, but I saw that you have a plan for this.