Going to spend the next two or so weeks, maybe less, re-writing the beginning of this story. I did a bad job at introducing Tsuji's previous mental state and forcibly rushed it to get straight to the new world thinking that it didn't matter but it ended up bugging me after all.

So I'm going to take the time to completely re-write the prologue. I won't touch anything else but I will be re-writing the prologue almost entirely and adding a few more chapters to continue explaining his situation prior to dying and being reincarnated so that it gives you a better understanding of why he will be so immoral.

So with that said, when the prologue changes, and the chapter titles (as in 1, 2, 3 etc) will be re-arranged depending on how many chapters after the prologue it takes to satisfy my introduction of Tsuji.

Been sick lately and haven't been sleeping properly so while I was laying in bed today I realized how unsatisfied I was with the start.


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