Impractical Magic

by Writingonaphone

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Female Lead Gender Bender LitRPG Magic Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Our protagonist came from a broken family and because of that, made his life a total wreck. To top it off, while on his way home, he got shot and killed when he fought a robber.

He thought that it was the end. Until he was reincarnated into a different world of fantasy and magic. In which he had a loving family that raised him, the only problem is... He is now a She?!

 

 

 

 

 

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Capitão Caverna
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Well the POV change on the first chapters annoyed the hell out of me and, quite frankly, could be deleted entirely.

Now for the MC... he is far too girly I mean in the prologue he was supposed to be from a bad family and be a rebel capable of turning around and beating the face of a robber because he is pissed off but then, when he becomes a girl, he doesn't curse, he is far too inocent, he is afraid of insects, he doesn't really resist using skirts... sometimes it's like he has never been a man.

Also the childhood arc is far too fast, it's like 'so he was born, when he was 3 this happens, when he was 10 this happen, then he turned 13, then he turned 14" When he spoke about Blake the first time I had no Idea who it was it came out of the blue.

Now I don't actualy like childhood arcs but if you're gonna gloss over it like that you may as well star from when he turned 14 or something... I have read some novels like that and it works.

So if you want a better score I highly suggest changing the beginning of your story to either show the MC growth better or skipping everything there and starting from when he met the first monster, write more details man it would make this much better

Don't take this as me saying your story is crap, it isn't, it's kind of fun and pass the time but the MC acting too much like a girl when I expect him to be a man sometimes annoy the hell out of me and the first POV change to blake nearly made me drop it

Also don't take the 3 stars as me being a troll... too many ppl in RR give stars based on their feelings like, if they see something they don't like they imediately give a half stars or if they see an overpowered MC fulfilling all their fantasies they give it a 5 and that isn't good.

To me your story is worth 3 stars... if you take out the first pov and change the prologue for him to be more girly even as a man, write some more details or something it could be worth 4 stars.

5 stars are much harder, if I ave ever read 10 stories in RR trully worth 5 stars I would be surprised, to me 5 stars are sories that would stand among any book prom a professional writer.

TheDarkMist
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Its good but the mc can be too much of a baby girl sometimes and its hard to think the mc is a guy sometimes

So a 3.5 to a 4 cant say that it is a 4 but idk if it's a 3.5 either so just give it a try I guess

Calavente
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Interesting for a first story

This read is interesting.

 

however, I'd say that the MC seems to have been quite sheltered in his previous life... or he forgets really easily that he's now a girl ! (he doesn't have a mind "dirty" enough for a guy that was a teenager in our world with easy access to internet)

 

As a preference I'm not keen on the difference of POV that we see early in the story : it often repeats things that we know already, most often with the exact same words. (the additional interest of the POV is often only a few sentences out of a dozen paragraphs !)

However this "weakness" is cured in the latest chapters  : the POV become more normal : a different POV to show the scene, without much overlap, unless needed.

 

Further I like the take on the world / on the story /... I really hope (s)he scores on maria :D

grammar and vocabulary are kept simple, but no obvious mistakes are made.

Story telling is also simple and straightforward, but for a 1st story it's good enough.

Wickian
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I'm about 2/3 of the way through the current chapters and the story is enjoyable if you're looking for something to kill a few days reading. 

It has some annoying tropes I'm not a fan of but are low key enough to not be overbearing and although the characters are nothing special they aren't a pain to read through either.

This is unlikely to become one of the stories that has you eagerly awaiting the next update, but it isn't a waste of time to read either if the summary interests you.

I'll be generous since I'm between stories and give it a 4/5 since it's accomplished what I wanted it to do.

Anonymously Amused
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Pleasant to read and sometine deep

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 I think its quite pleasant to read dunno why some give bad star

Tbh by pleasant i mean it has good wording without any shit shit shit 💩 poop shit language 

Well pov change a lot?  Deal with it 

Its make story funnier since we can know what the other chara see and think 

Well if other find that unpleasant i suggest author to make separate chapter for the others pov as bonus chapter or side story or just like kumo desu nanika chaptering name 

Mc is girly and not manly? 

We know some people love guys too much but remember body affect mind

Environment too

Whoever you are girly manly boyly womanly oily

Depend on how you look like and hows your environment it will affect your personality

What?  Man scared of insect is girly?  Pls, insect is creepy as hell cause even i creeped out by it

Even ant 

 

I suggest other than commenting the chara story and etc

Try give suggestions too

Spicyice101
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This is a really good story, I really like it. However, if there was one thing that I wish was fixed, that would be the character descriptions. We have almost no description of Blake except that he is tall, and while we have Angelica’s “sizes”, we don’t have her height. If you could describe the characters with more than just “tall”, maybe even include a numerical value, that would be great. I like to imagine characters facing their challenges mentally, and that’s hard to do without specific descriptions.

 

ps, if you don’t plan to add this to the story, can you pm me their heights or somthing?

-Thank You.

 

edit - as you have added heights to the characters in chapter 4, I’m adding a bit more to character score.

Senno
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Dont like mc to much of a girl and i didn't see Litrpg in 15 chapters if you dont have it the story then dont use tag im angry wasted time reading this.

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Realy Good. Worth reading.

Realy good story with excelent grammar, well tought plot and interesting characters. Comedy elements were very funny, along  perfect MC for me, that deserve a real prise. After all, it's hard to make a convincing gender bent MC. On top of that, even if there were errors (which I haven't noticed) they didn't ruin the flow of the story. And the last thing that I REALY liked was a surge of over 60 chapters in one day (which were all read by me in a few hours). Novel in one shot got in my top 5 gender bent novels and I wait for it to climb higher.