A Civil Minotaur In An Uncivilized World

by Lucianothelightnovelwriter

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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After interrupting a battle taking place between a human hunter and a goblin archer a minotaur named Ragnor decides he doesn't want to be defined or limited by human stereotypes about his species. He embarks on an adventure to become a successful businessman and leave his mark on both his fellow monsters and to change human opinions and challenge stereotypes about monsters. Along the way, he learns about trade and the sophistication of running a business as well as the dangers of investing in natural resources. He makes use of his body and physique to go on adventures, create trade routes, and serve as an economic ambassador to human kingdoms, devilish theocracies, and monstrous developing democracies. Join him on his adventures and enter the mysterious world of Cosmyteria a planet where dangerous monsters are as plentiful as adaptable humans and where economics matter every bit as much as religion and magical universities. 

This is a lit-RPG but it doesn't feature a resurrected or transported protagonist and its monsters aren't intelligent because they were or are secretly human but rather because intelligence is necessary to survive in a world where every magician can hurl energy orbs and conjure mysterious beings from other worlds. It has skills and evolution, including for humans as well as classes and magic but they won't be revealed every chapter. Don't expect a ton of blue status charts & interrupting level up screens in the middle of a chapter. Ragnor is definitely not your Grandpa's minotaur but he isn't secretly a future god nor is he going to take every single cute elf or succubus to bed. He's a minotaur determined to make money and run a business intelligently while taking advantage of his own strength and gain business from kings, queens, high priests, and prime ministers.

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argusthecat
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I love the plot synopsis.  The idea, the *ideal*, for this story, is amazing.  It's something I seriously want to read.

But so far, as of chapter four, I feel more like this is a story about an overpowered main character, rather than about glorious commerce.  I was really hoping for a high fantasy version of Spice and Wolf with a bit of 'the main character is an outsider in more ways than one'.  That's not really what there is so far.  I'm hoping for more, and I will check back, because I KNOW the author can write something I want to read.  I know this, because they wrote the synopsis.

I do really hope it gets delivered on.

TheLoneOne
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Honestly looks rather promising and im currently on the first and second chapters, i love the long chapters and the story currently looks... very intriguing and i cant wait for more :3

 

I have found little spelling mistakes and i thought i would leave a review for a new author who i hope will keep going, i may change this later - for better or worse, but i would give the book a go ^^

 

i kinda rambled whoops

MadHat3r
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This is still fairly new and short so here's five stars to get the hype train going.

So, Grammer is great, characters feel a little bland but that' just them not having a lot of time to develop so far (still better than a lot of fan service shit), intresting system, the only thing I think the author would need to actively work on is formating and cutting down some of the huge walls of text as there has been a couple.