Cloud Dungeon

by VRDraco

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Female Lead LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Reincarnation Summoned Hero Supernatural

In the many parallel worlds filling the universe, earth is a rare world which possessed the largest amount of 'interference' from other worlds. The most common interference is the summoning of heroes and reincarnation. This story is no different except that in the process of calling the desired people, the efforts of three goddesses were messed with causing the summoned to not be the older brother or the father. Instead a four year old child was summoned.

Backed by her love of fairy tales and folklore, we shall see how this young child with the help of her lazy best friend and pet cat will change the very face of the world starting from a tiny cloud and becoming a dungeon filled with any and all fairy tales she had heard of and watched.

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99Bigbear
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Read Book on Amazon... It Was Awesome!!

Read the entire book on Amazon little grammar and spelling errors here and there but nothing so serious that it would change the story.  The characters are constantly fleshing themselves out adding new quirks to the characters to make them more real in the mind of the reader.  The story pulls you in and makes you want to turn page after page of the story.  Put together all these elements and you have another wonerful story by VRDraco.

Though I wish he would finish writing the second book of the Slime Tamer's Chronicles or The Mystery of the Dungeon those were also good books.

With good intentions a fellow reader and amateur author.

bladedante
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Great story btw in the synopsis u might wanna mention the book is up for free on Amazon kindle if you have kindle unlimited

Marc'dU4death
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First off i'll say is i normally love dungeon stories, so finding myself droping this is odd to say the least.

maybe its because i read the RRL version instead of the amazon idk.

I found the story so far to be quite repeditive, and having poor word choices quite often.

the main issue i think is that i really don't care about any character so far. 

the "main" character the dungeon i don't even like when she shows up . honestly there's so much jumping around i don't feel that anyone is a main character.

Kioku
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Okay, but characters too annoying to get far.

The writing is fine and the idea is great, but the characters are just so, so annoying that I can't bear to read for long periods.  That and the author is using reasoning that is flimsy at best for the expansion, which is just bothersome.