Rules-Free VRMMO Life

by Mirikon

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Harem LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Reader interactive Strategy Strong Lead Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

The year is 2076, and mankind has perfected VR technology, using the Chip, an implant that interfaces directly with the human brain, using it like an organic computer. Age of Anarchy Online (AAO) is the newest game released by Icestorm, makers of the legendary World of Destiny (WoD). Unlike VR games before it, AAO promises a 110% 'Better Than Life' realism experience, and to showcase this, Icestorm announces that AAO will have no 'Out of Character' rules, save for actions like hacking or exploiting system errors. Players can do anything to NPCs and even other players, and there will be no consequences save what one may suffer in game. "Do what thou wilt, but it may be done to you in turn." Mike Greene, better known in WoD as Torgan, a max level Paladin and leader of the Lords of Light, one of the top 'light side' guilds in WoD, now sets off on a new adventure in AAO. -------------------- Author's Note: If you haven't guessed, and the mature tag didn't help clue you in, there's going to be all kinds of nastiness in this story. Violence, language, racism, sexism, sex, gore, vore, and more! If you have triggers of any kind, this is your warning. If you're looking for a nice, heartwarming tale like Sword Art Online, keep looking. There will be 'good guys' as well, but this is a story where Might IS Right. However, if you've read Watchmen and Wanted, and like what you read (READ, not the movies!), then you just may find this story in your strike zone. And for f*ck's sake, this is just a story! Don't take this as an endorsement of any of the actions in this story.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue - Age of Anarchy Online ago
Chapter 1 - Heroes ago
Chapter 2 - Character Creation, Part 1 ago
Chapter 3 - Character Creation, Part 2 ago
Chapter 4 - Character Creation, Part 3 ago
Chapter 5 - Character Creation, Part 4 ago
Chapter 6 - Tutorial, Part 1 ago
Chapter 7 - Tutorial, Part 2 ago
Chapter 8 - The Cabin ago
Chapter 9 - The Ruin ago
Chapter 10 - First Conquest ago
Chapter 11 - Before the Altar ago
Chapter 12 - The Priestess and the Princesses ago
Chapter 13 - First Night in Fathon ago
Chapter 14 - Testing ago
Chapter 15 - Class Change ago
Chapter 16 - Professional Opinions and Work History ago
Chapter 17 - Slave Market ago
Chapter 18 - Guild Card and Second Night ago
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Chapter 19 - Preparing for a Journey ago
Chapter 20 - Setting Off ago
Chapter 21 - Fierce Battle ago
Chapter 22 - The Lair ago
Chapter 23 - Gepheart Village ago
Chapter 24 - Wyrmwood Border ago
Chapter 25 - Meeting the King ago
Chapter 26 - Trade Chat ago
Chapter 27 - Down to the Grind ago
Chapter 28 - Class Act ago
Chapter 29 - Dungeon Research ago
Chapter 30 - To the Pits ago
Chapter 31 - Traps and Trap ago
Chapter 32 - Hunger and Longing ago
Chapter 33 - Frozen Time, Fiery Rage ago
Chapter 34 - Shattered Pride ago
Chapter 35 - Wild Abandon ago
Chapter 36 - Demon's Pawn ago
Chapter 37 - Exorcism of Pride ago
Chapter 38 - The Guild ago
Chapter 39 - Traveling to the Caverns ago
Chapter 40 - Ullelone Village ago
Chapter 41 - Forebodings of War ago
Chapter 42 - Answers ago
Chapter 43 - Operation: Jailbreak ago
NAC: Update ago
Chapter 45 - Demon's Duel ago
Chapter 44 - Operation: Jailbreak, Part 2 ago
Chapter 46 - Trade Chat II ago
Chapter 47 - Gates of the Underdark ago
Chapter 48 - The Next Step ago
Chapter 49 - Gaining the Keep ago
Chapter 50 - The Trial of Ascension, Part I ago
Chapter 51 - The Trial of Ascension, Part II ago
Chapter 52 - The Trial of Ascension, Part III ago
Chapter 53 - The Results of the Trial ago
Chapter 54 - Lithaes Village ago
Chapter 55 - Base Building for Beginners ago
Chapter 56 - Initiative and Boundaries ago
Chapter 57 - Cursed Mine ago
Chapter 58 - Knightmares ago
Chapter 59 - Dark Daughter ago
Chapter 60 - The Liberation of Duskhaven ago
Chapter 61 - Trade Chat III ago
Chapter 62 - Return to Fathon ago
Chapter 63 - I Deserved That ago
Chapter 64 - Blood Rites ago
Chapter 65 - Raiding the Renegades ago
Chapter 66 - Bloodmaul and Shyrl ago
Chapter 67 - Hunting the Dead ago
Chapter 68 - The Vault ago
Chapter 69 - Hammer of Death ago
Chapter 70 - Blacklake ago
Chapter 71 - Wild Oats ago
Chapter 72 - Away from Human Lands ago
Chapter 73 - Sharp. Pointy. TEETH! ago
Chapter 74 - The Lost Archive ago
Chapter 75 - Goblin Loremistress ago
Chapter 76 - Hunting the Hunters ago
Chapter 77 - Abyssal Rift ago
Chapter 78 - Trade Chat IV ago
Chapter 79 - Trolling the Trolls ago
Chapter 80 - Black Rock Hold ago
Chapter 81 - About as Expected ago
Chapter 82 - Entering the Cells ago
Chapter 83 - The Warden ago
Chapter 84 - Firewatch ago
Chapter 85 - The Door in the Mountain ago
Chapter 86 - Monwihr ago
Chapter 87 - Hardbottle Clan ago
Chapter 88 - A Request ago
Chapter 89 – Villains’ Feast ago
Chapter 90 - Trial of the Gods: Moradin ago
Chapter 91 - Trial of the Gods: Lolth ago
Chapter 92 - Trial of the Gods: Tempus ago
Chapter 93 - Trial of the Gods: Necron ago
Chapter 94 - Trial of the Gods: Loviatar ago
Chapter 95 - Trial of the Gods: Sharess ago
Chapter 96 - The Trial's Reward ago
Chapter 97 - Leaving Dwarven Lands ago
Chapter 98 - The Slime Mistress ago
Chapter 99 - The Deep One ago
Chapter 100 - Phantom Shop ago
Chapter 101 - The Border ago
Chapter 102 - Sudden Assault ago
Chapter 103 - Coup de Main ago
Chapter 104 - Trade Chat V ago
Chapter 105 - Family Matters ago
Chapter 106 - Preparing for the Crucible ago
Chapter 107 - Crucible of the Drow, pt 1 ago
Chapter 108 - Crucible of the Drow, Pt 2 ago
Chapter 109 - Into the Dark ago
Chapter 110 - Dungeon of the Lost Legion, Pt 1 ago
Chapter 111 - Dungeon of the Lost Legion, Pt 2 ago
Chapter 112 - Reset and Recover ago
Chapter 113 - The Labyrinth of the Spider Queen ago
Chapter 114 - The Ancient Drider ago
Chapter 115 - Blade in the Dark ago
Chapter 116 - The Crypt of Vaemzu ago
Chapter 117 ago
Chapter 117 - Trade Chat VI ago
Chapter 119 - The Phantom Bridge ago
Chapter 120 - The Gates of Amyaththalas ago
Chapter 121 - The Deep Crystal Inn ago
Chapter 122 - The Grand Temple of Lolth ago
Chapter 123 - Audience With the High Priestess ago
Chapter 124 - The Queen of Dragons ago
Chapter 125 - A Consort's Duty ago
Chapter 126 - A Summons to House Kalreban ago
Chapter 127 - Negotiations ago
Chapter 128 - The Grand Slave Market ago
Chapter 129 - Selections ago
Chapter 130 - The Academy ago
Chapter 131 - The Archmage ago
Chapter 132 - The Binding ago
Chapter 133 - The Disavowed ago
Chapter 134 - Preparing for War ago
Chapter 135 - The Fields of Amhelin ago
Chapter 136 - Conference on the Eve of War ago
Chapter 137 - Blades in the Dark ago
Chapter 138 - Rain of a Thousand Flames ago
Chapter 139 - Battle at Dawn ago
Chapter 140 - Dragonflame ago
Chapter 141 - Lightshadow ago
Chapter 142 - Clash of Kings ago
Chapter 143 - Victory ago
Chapter 144 - Trade Chat VII ago
Chapter 145 - Clipping Her Wings ago
Chapter 146 - Chained Princess ago
Chapter 147 - Dragon Taming ago
Chapter 148 - Replenishment ago
Chapter 149 - Guild Management ago
Chapter 150 - Summit of Good and Evil ago
Chapter 151 - Nothing Bad Will Happen ago
Chapter 152 - Conference With the King ago
Chapter 153 - Dungeon of the Brain Eaters ago
Chapter 154 - Demons and Psions ago
Chapter 155 - The Lord of Slimes ago
Chapter 156 - The Stormcaller's Sigil ago
Chapter 157 - Trade Chat VIII ago
Chapter 158 - The Steel Dwarf ago
Chapter 159 - Soulforged ago
Chapter 160 - Caledon ago
Chapter 161 - Dominion ago
Chapter 162 - Family Reunion ago
Chapter 163 - Heir to the Throne ago
Chapter 164 - Royal Obligations ago
Chapter 165 - Resolution ago
Chapter 166 - Return to Black Rock Hold ago
Chapter 167 - Consort ago
Chapter 168 - Doorway to the Abyss ago
Chapter 169 - Xanl City ago
Chapter 170 - Meet the Parents ago
Chapter 171 - Xanl Slave Market ago
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Elina Violets
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Reveals one's kinky side

First of all, for those that keep saying stuff like "this is so kinky, yadayada I'll give this a negative review cause I couldn't handle all the copulate-related scenes" I want to say this: "Clearly you didn't read the entire description the author has given this story, because there they already wrote that this story has sex-infested scenes, and even have the warning that this story fiction contains:

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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

so I really do not understand why some of you seem to be whining about it being like this. I understand that this is not everyone's favorite type of story, and that's completely understandable, but to hate it because it uses, in the author's own words, 'sexy-time to build the story', is a bit insulting the author that already warned you that sexy-time will be present in the story. Honestly I admire how nonchalant the author has been about that type of hate, because they could of just as well stopped writing all together because an overload of negative crittisism can really damage an author's will to continue writing, so I applaud you author, your determination is outstanding."

The second thing I want to say to the author is that I really don't mind that some sexy-time is patreon-only, as long as it trully does not disrupt the storyline itself. I get enough sexy-time from what you use to build the story, so if you want to earn some cash from those good extra scenes is fine by me :3

So on to the ratings!

  • Style: I see you have developed your own style of writing that really compliments the flow of the story, so I have no complaints here.
  • Story: It is indeed an awesome story, but in the latter chapters I really got overwhelmed by all the things the mc has to go do. That in itself is actually a positive sign that your character can still do many things to keep the story running, but it kept this 'need to do this, then do that'-string of events that it came over as overwhelming. I would suggest there being chapters of True down-time for the mc; where his to-do list should be out of sight (for atleast a moment). For the rest the author balances the times of action and the times of rest pretty well, so the rest is also good in my book.
  • Grammar: I am really amazed by how good the grammar is, it's so good that even honest dislikers of the story have rated it pretty well. It even came to that I find it an accomplishment if I found even one letter out of place, and I have only had one or two accomplishments in finding such errors (there was this once that a hir/shi character has been accidentally called a she, but even that could have been auto-correct thinking it was correct).
  • Characters: the characters we have been interacting with have all been pretty 3-d to me, and all have a reason for doing what they are doing, some having a pretty interesting backstory which leaded them to be in the mc's 'party'. The only one that puts me a bit off is the hir/shi character, being a bit of a fan-made character (which shi partly is). I feel the mc doesn't look eye-to-eye to this character, but that can also just be me.

 

This has been my opinion and my review, you don't have to agree, but I hope it proves justice to how good the story is :3

Have a nice day~

- Elina Violets

Monokuma
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Fun and interesting story, but a bit too OP MC (pro gamer, talent in swords, evolving weapon, bow, magic, sneak, charm, sex master...). 

P.S This story really reminds me of Himekishi ga classmate (My Classmate is a Princess Knight! ~ Different World Cheat Starting an Enslaved Harem~)

SpiderQueen
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The story is a rather blatant power fantasy, and if that's what you're looking for you'll probably enjoy to read it as it can be a valid genre. The main character can do no wrong and every action they take works out perfectly.

I enjoy the setting (even if much of it is stolen from Forgotten Realms/WotC which you should probably beware of if you're attempting monetization) and the system created for the in-game MMO is interesting. The characters are horrendous, but perhaps a by-product of too many being present and attention can't be paid to any of them to a great degree. Regardless, when they are given attention they're pretty much just extensions of the main character with little thought or will to themselves, even the side characters that aren't NPCs but other players. There are few female characters written with any degree of strength, poise, or strong characterization but to be fair there aren't any male characters beyond the MC written with any depth at all.

 

It's well-written with good grammar, and while there does appear to be a plot in the development it's a bit mired in lewd scenes that lack any significant detail to really be called erotic. They're a touch too frequent and too little detailed to be of great interest. It could do with a bit more imagery, which is probably where it's most lacking in terms of technical skills. Areas aren't really described, and neither are people which should be one of the greatest strengths in the fantasy genre.

 

 

P.S. In that scene where he had to keep the two weak NPCs alive in the dungeon, could he not have just put them in that extradimensional tent he has? It doesn't really matter as it was a foregone conclusion that he wouldn't fail at anything.

P.P.S. One of my questions is: what occurs in game while the player is not in game? Does their avatar fade out or is it locked in game asleep ready to be ganked? How does the time dilation factor into that? If they go outside the game to sleep/eat (as they must surely do) days/weeks might seem to pass in game. The only way to account for that at the moment is that perhaps years can pass in game before needing to go out of game (though that in itself could lead to some power level discrepancies like if Zayn logged out his enemies would have years to work against him).

P.P.P.S. Please be consistent in the pronouns used for Hrozne. In one chapter you refer to them as "hir/shi" in another it'll be "her/she" and in yet another it will be "him/he". I dislike artifically crafted pronouns such as "hir/shi" but at least be consistent.

Liamrodhudson331
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Before any of you start throwing bricks at me. Read why first.

This story is essentially the fantasy version of Into The Black. Only much less well-written. The story has next to plot, the encounters are all over the place and the charm character and slavemamcer are not the fun kinds.

When I play RPG, I often find myself looking forward to the next level up and skill, but slavemancer pretty much explains itself. Afterwards, he did change his class into Hex Blade but the change did basically nothing as there is still no tension.

Bosses die too quick, MC power-ups way too fast. Unlike the satisfied and excited feelings Into The Black gave me, I came out of this severely disappointed.

As for characters... It's a Mirikon story, all of them are gonna be fucked in the heads, what do you expect? Still, I find nothing interesting about character development, I doubt MC is gonna change anytime soon, if at all.

The fighting scenes are lack-luster. No tension to be had since MC stealth-kills, schemes at almost every turns. It'd be fun if it only happen a time or two, but when he uses it for the tenth time, it just lost all meaning.

And really? 20 inches dick? That's fucking unreal, there's nothing real about that shit. And it's fucking retarded to have. Firstly its size would affect his agility, and I doubt it could fit in pants. Not to mention it's an easy target for enemies to kick..

I came pretty much for the genderbender tag, only to find it disappeared along the way. I pretty started to read Into The Black for the same reason, but stay because the story is good, at least way better than this. The characters there are also more diverse in personality. The women are not mindless sex-bots like in this one.

playmenot
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People look AT the description,

I am not sure if I am the only one here, but one of the only things I am grateful for elementary school is they taught me to read the description of a book before actually reading the book itself. Like for example one comments said this story is "Really Really Creepy". Well the author clearly said it will have Violence, language, racism, sexism, sex, gore, vore, and more. There books that are even more creepy, trust me. But non of them have reviews saying the book is to creepy. Right doesn't that sound stupid saying a book is to creepy, when the author say itself it will be creepy. 

 

So people for crying out loud, read the description first.

Also guess what, when you say the book is creepy, well that kind of a complement, as this fiction is done in that way a purpose. So instead of me seeing one stars for creepiness, it should be seeing five stars. 

Runner
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Do NOT read if you've never dreamed about playing a RPG on Team Evil

Ever play the old paper & pencil roleplaying games where you got to play the bad guy?  That is this story, expect all those things you might try and do as the bad guy.

 

While the story and main characters are very good and have some depth to them.  There is one main issue I have -

The story is very good if you read everything at once.  As it has a very continuous flow and each chapter builds off of the last chapter.  Reading it one chapter every couple of days breaks up the story and gives it a bit of a choppy feeling.

 

Couple people have made posts about the OP nature of the main character.  The main character is not OP.  He plays to his strengths, does his best to avoid his weakness, and is smart enough to get help (one way or another - remember he's playing on team evil) to cover areas he's not strong in.

 

 

bakadee
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Had to change my review, Author decided to put a paywall on the story

The Author seems to have decided to put the story behind a paywall. Decides to give the ‘complete’ storyline if your a patreon of his. Unless you pay, you won’t get the full interaction and events that happen. Dissapointed.

CianSlayaa
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I'm too old for this sh*t!

This story easily places itself well below the average quality.
The opness is annoying, i can understand the inital stats trope but the unique self made gears whith their profession skill low or at most basic level is just dumb and a little insulting to readers. 

A mix between wish fulfilment and attempt to shock value, a template story written by a 13 years old trying(and failing) to be edgy.

 

 

Kitrane
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Not perfect but still a great story for those who don't have a rod up their a** and have seen all the Internet has that don't mind. The story has crude elements but that adds to the comedy of the situation and the story is actually decent compared to some stuff. If there were 2 releases a week at least I would give a full 5. Also the people bi****** about the 'pay for porn chapters' need to realize that it's just that. Porn. I so far don't see where the plot lacks because he doesn't put the porn in. 

Draggd
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diggin the story line and the harem route. from what i am seeing from this, main char will be a harem king of amazons botn in and out of the bedroom. and now adding a demoness to the mix, is a good twist on things. i am guessing she will be either the accountant or the record keeper.