Unbound Deathlord: Challenge
by edwardcastle
- Graphic Violence
- Profanity
Due to Amazon's Kindle Unlimited rules, I had to pull most of the book content from RoyalRoad.
Only sample chapters remain.
To read a fiction that will never be removed from Royal Road, I recommend my other fiction: Immortal Conqueror.
The first two books of the series are out on Amazon:
Book 1: Unbound Deathlord: Challenge
Book 2: Unbound Deathlord: Obliteration
Book 1: Challenge
When virtual reality becomes real enough that people feel as if they’re being transported to another world, Valia Online arrives.
A man running from his past joins the game to forget it all. Calling himself Jack Thorn, he chooses an undead race, Deathlord.
A mage by choice, and a swordsman by necessity, he soon finds out that he’ll need to use much more than magic and steel to survive; strategy, creativity, and carefully chosen words can often accomplish what simple attacks can’t.
As the game becomes too real and touches a part of him that he’d rather leave buried, he is faced with two questions:
Who is he, really?
And who should he become?
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wise and great deathlord
story is funny, and intense. great read so far, and i need more
Good Story
One of the better stories on my reading list. Slow right now but I'm sure its because its in the beginning stages. I would like more loots! He's the legendary spotter...
Why isn't this on Amazon?
This story is fantastic and the author should definately be getting paid for it. I can't wait for more!
I feel like your a bit of a redditer
I enjoyed your since of humor and use of random internet and story troupes.
Likable but indicating towards cliché and OP MC in the near future.
Likable MC and quite funny at times. He feels protected by plot armour and grows quickly to have more potential and power than many others. I never got so far as to see his magnificent plot armour in full glory and OPness to the max but I can guess it. I may be wrong but... veeery unlikely in my own oppinion. OP MC is simply not my thing, I find it cliché.
Good entry into the LitRPG
A very good story. MC is an ass but that means the writing is good when you start to feel emotions. I am very excited to explore and follow this story. Well worth the read.
loved it!!!!!
keep writing!! Sounds like he is going places, cant wait!
Good Afternoon fellow Madmen let's listen to a story.
Style: The Author shows a neat balance between comedy and serious storytelling.
Story: The Game theme itself is nothing new but the take on its properties is. The inner Turmoil of the Character is also being depicted nicely and gradually unraveled.
Grammar: All in all good, a few typos and mistakes here and there but a quick cleanup of the already released chapters would fix that too.
Character: Although sometimes confusing, most Characters are well made even though the Author seems to love torturing us by leaving us in the Dark about a lot of the Backstory. (Which I'm certain will follow after some time but teasing us like that is not nice.)
All in all a very good read. Now bring me more of that written cocain slave! :P
Such a good series. i heard we were getting new chapters soon! keep uo the good work, Ed
Great read
Awesome read. Quality of a book with almost perfekt grammar and good pacing of the Story.
Can definetly recommemd it!